2016届广东省高考英语二轮原创复习课件：基础写作

地点介绍 相关短语

晨 读 背 诵 1. neighbor Hong Kong与香港为邻 2. be made up of/consist of由……组成 3. be located /situated in 坐落在 4. serve as当……用 5. with /has a history of有……的历史 6. with/has a population of有……人口 7. with/cover an area of 面积有…… 8. the third largest city第三大城市

9. be famous for以……而著名 10.be well-known for/as因为/作为……而出名 11.on its east lies 东边有…… 12. a fantastic place 一个极好的地方 13.be rich /abundant in盛产 14.a three-storeyed building一栋三层楼的房子 15. attract a large number of visitors吸引大量

游客 16. enjoy a warm and wet climate气候温暖而

湿润 17. the famous scenic spots著名的旅游景点 18. be rich in tourism resources旅游资源丰富 19. at a reasonable price以合理的价格 20. lies in/on/to 位于…… 相关句式

1. 我想向你介绍一下我的家乡。 I would like to introduce my hometown to you.

2. 我的家乡，毗邻香港，位于广东省。 My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong， is located in Guangdong Province. 3. 广州，一座拥有大约1300万人口的城市，有2200多年的历史了。 Guangzhou,

a city with a population of

about thirteen million, has a history of more than 2,200 years.

4. 这座城市占地面积达7, 434平方公里，人口大约是10, 000, 000。 Covering a total area of 7, 434 square kilometers,

this city has a population of

about ten million. 5. 它自然资源得天独厚，有丰富的煤和金矿,而且气候温和。 It is rich in natural resources such as

coal and gold， and has mild climate.

6. 我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。 Our school is no longer what it used to be. 技 巧 点 拨

1. 介绍或描述地点的基础写作，通常以表格形式来呈现写作要点。考生必须重新组织表格内容，不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译，如不能写成“The location of Guangzhou is in the south of China”这样不地道的句子，相应的表达应该是：Guangzhou lies in the south of China. 2. 确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。 3. 避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句，而应该具体写出描述的对象，如the Great Wall， Hong Kong等。但如果整篇文章中多处用“it” 等作主语，文章会稍显逊色，所以在写作过程中，可根据文意适当变换主语，如改写为the place， the city等。 典 型 例

题 你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城。 ［写作内容］ 请写一篇短文介绍长城，内容包括： 历史 有两千多年的历史。 特点 世界上最长的城墙，长6000多千米; 建筑材料主要为石头，砖头，修建工作都是 人工进行; 主要用于防御外来入侵者，沿墙每隔几百米 就有烽火台(watchtower)。 现状 世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。 Ladies and Gentlemen，

Welcome to the Great Wall. The Great Wall， which is over 6，000 kilometers long， is the longest wall in the world. It has a history of more than 2，000 years. It is made of stones and bricks and almost all the construction was done by hand without any machine.

As the wall was built to defend the country against foreign invaders，there were watchtowers every few hundred meters along the wall. Now， the Great Wall is one of the most famous places of interest in China and it attracts many foreign visitors every year. 课堂练习

The island of Taiwan, whose shape is similar to a sweet potato, lies some 180 km off the coast of Fujian Province and it has a population of slightly over 23 million and an area of about 36,000 square kilometers. Due to its pleasant climate, this beautiful island, 60% of which is covered by forest, is rich in natural resources. There are about 18400 species of wildlife on the island.

Many well-known tourist attractions, such

as Ali Mountain and Sun Moon Lake, along with the rich culture of the minority people and local cuisine make it the perfect travel destination. 亮点点击：本文较好地运用了介绍地点的常用短语，如cover/have/with an area of(表达面积), have/with a population of(表达人口), be located (in)/lie (in)(表达位置), be rich in(表达资源)等。 课外作业

Diaoyu Dao and its affiliated islands, attached to the Taiwan Island, have been China’s Inherent Territory since ancient times. These islands are located to the northeast of China’s Taiwan Island, and the total area of them is about 5.69 square kilometers.

Situated in the western tip of the area, Diaoyu Dao, the largest island in the area, covers an area of about 3.91 square kilometers. The earliest historical record

of the names of Diaoyu Dao, Chiwei Yu

and other places can be found in the book Voyage with a Tail Wind ( Shun Feng Xiang Song) published in 1403.

After World War II, Diaoyu Dao was returned to China according to the related international legal documents.

亮点点击：在写作过程中注意活用短语、句型，避免重复。如文中分别用了be located in 和 (be) situated in 表示“位于”， 用the area is…和cover an area of表示“面积”。本文的亮点还在于过去分词作定语以及最后一句所用的被动语态。