第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第八讲 揣摩图画内涵，从容掌控图画作文 参考词汇：banner (横幅)
stump (树桩) 你的作文应包括以下内容： 1．简要描述两幅图的内容；
2．概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；
3．举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意：1.可参照图片适当发挥；
2．作文词数150 左右；
3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 Actions Speak Louder than Words _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ 1．图画中的信息是“百说不如一干”。 (一般表达)The message in the pictures is“Actions speak louder than words.” (高级表达)(主语从句和同位语从句) _______________________________________is the message ____________________________________________________ What
the
pictures
describe
vividly/convey that “Actions speak louder than words.” pay lip service to protect
which is suffering severe damage Faced with phenomenon/the problem it is more meaningful to who need them/needing them It is high time that we should under no circumstances should we _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain，while Picture 2 shows a couple planting trees happily. _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.”Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just
pay
lip
service
or
take
practical measures to
protect
it？The
answer
is definitely
the
latter. Immediate
action should be
taken, like
stopping
cutting down trees，to better the environment. _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Actions are important in other fields，too.Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at
the
red
light
rather
than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference. | 命题专家如是说 | 图画类作文解题关键 图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点，其难点在于如何将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。只有读懂图画所蕴含的深刻道理，才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点： 1．仔细观察图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都有提示作用，注意图画中每一个要素提供的信息。 2．品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅，认真思考这些文字所隐含的观点，使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙。 3．挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示的真正主题。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关键。 4．适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥，以使上下文更好地衔接。但一定要根据图画做到合情合理。 5．描写虚实结合。对图画中的内容分清主次，详略得当。 6．做好衔接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下，注意连词的使用，达到浑然一体的效果。 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优 第三部分 写作技能培优