2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错12

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

　　One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.

　　2.短文改错

　　Dear Tom,

　　I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new from here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices below．

　　First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always be ready to help you．We can take part in some activities together, that I can introduce you to others．

　　As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．

　　Best regards．

　　Peter

　　3.文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.

　　每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　Dear Editor,

　　Recently we have made a discussion about the prevent of global warming in our research group. Everybody has become aware the green-house effect, what has drawn the attention of the world. Many scientists on the summit of COPENHAGEN warned any rise above 2 degrees could lead to a sea level rise threatening islands and coastal cities, kill off many specie of animals and plants. As a result of, every nation should work together to limit the release of carbon dioxide. Everybody should shoulder the responsible to fight against climate change, and a low carbon life is a must.I think fight against global warming is part of environmental protection. If we humans are more friend to nature, nature will be friendly, too. It’s time everybody rethink our role in keeping peace with our mother, nature.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Lihua

　　4.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the Committee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they are interested in farming are invited to take part the activity. Weather permitted, we抣l ride bike to do some farming this Saturday o n a farm. It is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some vegetables, plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless you are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!

　　5.

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，则在该行右边横线上画出一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在此行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在此行右边横线上写出该加的词；

　　该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　The Grand Canal is the longest canal in the world．It

　　76．

　　runs from Beijing to Hangzhou, by a distance of nearly

　　77．

　　1,800 kilometres．Most rivers in China run from．western to

　　78．

　　east, so the ancient rulers found necessary to dig a canal

　　79．

　　that run from the south to the north．In the year 605

　　AD,

　　80．

　　Emperor Yang Guang ordered the canal to be dug．Dig such

　　81．

　　a long canal was very difficult．3．6 million of people worked

　　82．

　　on them and in less than a year over half of them lost their

　　83．

　　lives．Before the construction was completed, the Grand

　　84．

　　Canal has been playing an important roles in transport． 85．

　　6.假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop

　　friends

　　besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found

　　beside

　　an

　　we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is

　　去掉

　　was

　　so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched

　　gratefully

　　the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he

　　but

　　preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible∧give without

　　someone

　　to

　　expect anything in return.

　　expecting

　　2.

　　Dear Tom,

　　I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others, and you

　　is

　　may often feel lonely. That’s why you are new from here and people don’t know

　　because

　　about you. But I think you can make it if you can follow the advices

　　advice

　　below.

　　First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own

　　an

　　opinions about the matters. At the same time, never fail to listening to other

　　listen

　　people’s views. Second, you should learn/ your classmates’ likes and

　　about

　　dislikes. Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people

　　will

　　and show them that you are actually very friendly. Last but not least, I will

　　always be ready to help you. We can take part in some activities together, that I

　　where

　　can introduce you to others.

　　As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make

　　With(或者把going改为goes)

　　friends with you.

　　Best regards.

　　Peter

　　3.1. prevent→prevention

　　2. aware∧ of

　　3.what → which

　　4.kill →killing

　　5.specie →species

　　6. result of → result

　　7. responsible →responsibility

　　8. fight → fighting

　　9. friend → friendly

　　10. rethink → rethought

　　4.

　　Hi, everyone. To let us get closely to nature and do more exercise, the

　　close

　　Committee of our community will organise the activity. All residents they

　　an

　　who/that

　　are interested in farming are invited to take part∧the activity. Weather

　　in

　　permitted, we’ll ride bike to do some farming this Saturday on a farm. It

　　permitting

　　bikes

　　is about 5 kilometres far away from our community. You can grow some

　　删除

　　vegetables, plant some flowers and fed fish in the lake nearby. You will be

　　feed

　　trained and guide while farming. Not only will you enjoy the pleasure of

　　guided

　　labour and get relaxed, but also you can taste some fresh produce unless

　　if或将willing改为unwillingyou are willing to. Everyone is welcome to attend!

　　5.76. √

　　77. by → with

　　78. western → west

　　79. found后加it

　　80.run → ran

　　81. Dig → Digging

　　82.去掉million后面的of

　　83.第一个them → it

　　84. Before →Since

　　85.roles →role

　　6.

　　Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. OK, now

　　1. touching

　　listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going

　　from house to house on his street so he wanted to introduced him to all

　　2. because

　　3.himself

　　his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog

　　sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the

　　4.去掉was

　　people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell,

　　5.so

　　and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted

　　6.too

　　them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of

　　7.the

　　coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the

　　plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he

　　8.on

　　9.didn’t

　　petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, when

　　10.gently

　　it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!”