2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错15

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。

　　Miss Li is our English teacher. One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，“Our English teacher is going to have a operation today. It has not decided yet who will take his place. ”The class all turned silently at his words. Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door. She looked tiring and pale. “I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don’t want you to miss a single class. ” she said at a low voice， “A new teacher will take my place and I hope you’ll get on well with her. I’ll return back as soon as I’m well. ”Heard this，all of us were moved to tears. What a good teacher we have!

　　2.

　　下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Five years

　　my brother and I ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. One day he visited the city that I was living in to see our mother. I thought for nights about what to react to his visit. Since I had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. Finally, I went to my friends for advice. He suggested I offered my apology. When I did it, I felt relieving. Today I am so grateful to my friend. Without his advice, we wouldn’t enjoy the loving relationship with my brother. I have learned a truly life lesson from the whole experience. In short, I feel I have grown since.

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　One day，a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read：“I am blind，please help me. ” A gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign，noticed only a few coin in the man's hat. He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat. And then he turned the sign over again, wrote a new message and left. Several hours later，the gentleman returned. To his happy, he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. He didn't expect that the new message does work，which read: “It’s spring now, and I can't see it.”

　　4.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.

　　When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating

　　on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was

　　so amazed! When the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much

　　that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my

　　tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad

　　said, I chewed a piece of gum.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Fangfang,

　　I’m sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your English study recently．I’d like to give you some advice on learning English．First of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is first step in learning English

　　well．Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English, so theyare very likely to helping you when you meet difficulties．Thirdly, learning English well is a long

　　process．Remember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you

　　greatly．Anyway, you must work hard on English and never give up learning it．Just believe in

　　yourselves．Where there is a will, there is a way．

　　Hope my suggestions will give you some of help．

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　6.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. What’s worse, the

　　number of nearsighted students are still increasing. From my point of view, there are

　　many reason that can cause nearsightedness. First and foremost, the wrong posture will

　　easily result from nearsightedness. Read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as

　　well as. Moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. My

　　dear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. The most

　　useful method is do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading.

　　Watching green trees could also do good to the eyes.

　　试卷答案

　　1.66. a—an

　　67. not∧decided 加been

　　68. his—her

　　69. silently-silent

　　70. appears—appeared

　　71. tiring—tired

　　72. at—in

　　73. return back

　　删除back

　　74. well—better

　　75. heard—hearing

　　2.

　　Five years before my brother and I ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. One day

　　ago

　　a

　　he visited the city that I was living in to see our mother. I thought for nights about what to react

　　how

　　to his visit. Since I had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. Finally, I went to

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　　my friends for advice. He suggested I offered my apology. When I did it, I felt relieving. Today I am

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　　3.

　　1.on后加the

　　2.through---by

　　3.noticed---noticing

　　4.coin—coins

　　5.it—them

　　6.去掉again

　　7.happy---happiness

　　8.hat后加was

　　9.does—did

　　10.and ---but

　　4.

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　　When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating

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　　that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my

　　tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad

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　　said, I chewed a piece of gum.

　　5.

　　Dear Fangfang,

　　I’m sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your English study recently．I’d are

　　like to give you some advice on learning English．

　　First of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is

　　first step in learning English

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　　well．Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English, so

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　　are very likely to helping you when you meet difficulties．Thirdly, learning English well is a long

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　　process．Remember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you

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　　greatly．Anyway, you must work hard on English and never give up learning it．Just believe in

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　　yourselves．Where there is a will, there is a way．

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　　Hope my suggestions will give you some

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　　help．

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　6.

　　Nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. What’s worse, the

　　easy

　　number of nearsighted students are still increasing. From my point of view, there are

　　is

　　many reason that can cause nearsightedness. First and foremost, the wrong posture will

　　reasons

　　easily result from nearsightedness. Read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as

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　　well as. Moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. My

　　another

　　dear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. The most

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　　useful method is∧ do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading.

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　　Watching green trees could also do good to the eyes.

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