2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错29

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出修改的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching into the computer software. As an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.

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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

　　Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video games. Many of them spend all their spare time the games, and some even stay at the game machines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well as knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing after a day’s work and study, as video games can bring a fun to people’s life. However, on the other hand, play video games too much can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on people’s eyesight and healthy. So, video games, like coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should make properly use of the games.

　　3.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious

　　influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem, some pieces

　　of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this

　　way, the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But

　　on the othehand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded. In my

　　opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. And at the same time,

　　buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles. 

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　　该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

　　Recently, our school has held the meaningful discussion on whether it is reasonable for middle school students to have classes on weekends. Some of our classmates believe we should have classes on weekends because we can make fully use of free time to review the lessons we had learnt. Some others are against the opinion, saying we had better to have a good rest on weekends so that we can work effective during the weekdays. The rest agree with neither of the opinion. They have the view which keeping the balance between work and play are both important for us. They suggest one day of the weekend should used to learn our lessons and during the other day we do something interested or have a rest.

　　5.短文改错

　　Mr. Black,

　　We're very gladly to have received your money and some reading materials. Thank you very much. We had been studying hard since we came back to school. Under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progresses in our studies. So we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents. We have made up our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject good in order to be admitted to key universities in the future.We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Hangzhou ourselves. So we hope you can post us a photo of yours soon.

　　Best wishes,

　　Yours,

　　6.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。  增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。  删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。  注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　As is know to us all, paper burns easy. Yesterday, Mike, a six-year-old boy, made a paper box and then filled it for water. He then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. Much to his surprises, the paper box didn’t catch fire. Such curious was the child about the experiment that he asked his father endless questions about it. His father, which is a teacher in a primary school, didn’t know how to ask these questions, but he didn’t pretend to understand. He did everything he could help his son solve the problem. This experience made Mike interesting in the study of modern science.

　　试卷答案

　　1.1:richest-- the richest

　　2:that – which

　　3:researching – researched /去掉and

　　4:go—goes

　　5:extreme -- extremely

　　6:or—and

　　7:me—my

　　8:去掉in

　　9: exam—exams

　　10:of—to

　　2.

　　Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video

　　1.especially

　　2.given

　　games. Many of them spend all their spare time ∧the games, and some even stay at the game

　　3.on/playing

　　machines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well as knowledge

　　4.day

　　5. that

　　by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing after a day’s work and study, as

　　6. And

　　video games can bring a fun to people’s life. However, on the other hand, play video games

　　7. 删除a 8. playing

　　too much can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on people’s eyesight and healthy.

　　9. health

　　So, video games, like coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should make

　　properly use of the games.

　　10. proper

　　3.1.complaining→complaining about

　　2. serious→seriously

　　3. people→people’s

　　4.is→are

　　5.are→be

　　6.By →In

　　7.effect →affect

　　8.makes→make

　　9. under the control → under control

　　10. special routes cannot be→special routes that/which cannot be

　　4.The → a

　　fully

　　→ full

　　had

　　→ have

　　删除 to

　　effective → effectively

　　opinion → opinions

　　which → that

　　are →is

　　∧be

　　interested→ interesteing

　　5.1.gladly--glad

　　2.had--have

　　3.under--with

　　4.progresses--progress

　　5.we后加are

　　6.hard--harder

　　7.good--well

　　8.see--seeing

　　9.去掉the

　　10.your--yours

　　6.

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　　Known

　　easily

　　box and then filled it for water. He then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. Much to

　　with

　　tried

　　his surprises, the paper box didn’t catch fire. Such curious was the child about the experiment

　　surprise

　　So

　　that he asked his father endless questions about it. His father, which is a teacher in a primary

　　who

　　school, didn’t know how to ask these questions, but he didn’t pretend to understand. He did

　　answer

　　everything he could∧help his son solve the problem. This experience made Mike interesting

　　to

　　interested

　　in the study of modern science.