高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning!
Today, my topic is the valuable of time. Time, like the proverb says, is money. This means that if our time is good spent, it will turn out a lot of useful and important piece of work when the proper opportunity come. Although all time is precious, but the time of our youth is more precious than any period of our existence because this is the period which we can acquire knowledge and develop our abilities. If we allow these morning hours to slip away, we shall never able to make up the loss.
Let those who think nothing of waste time remember this. Thank you for your listening!
2.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing was common between the teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do something that may hurt your mom’s feelings. Here are some suggestions. First, it’s advisable to talk less with her. Heart-to-heart talks help you understand each other better. Besides, why not find more chance to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things. In these way, she may realize you had grown up. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proved to your mom that you are already “Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework. I believe why your mom will eventually understand you and you can get along well with her.
3.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom，
How are you getting along? I don't think this is a good idea to travel a lot and visit
as many place as possible．Last July Bell paid a visit on Europe．Europe was very
beautiful, but his holiday wasn't very nicely．He visited several countries, and was in each
of the countries for only three days．He visited a good many places of interest, and
was always in hurry．Though he returned from Europe, he was very tired．So I suggest that
you spent your holiday in a different way．We had better travel with a friend to
one country and to visit only one city at a time．You' be able to have a good time
John
4.短文改错
This morning on my way school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old manwas counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came running
and knocked her down. To make things worse, his money was lying in all direction. In no
time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood here, not know
what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked up. The old
man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy,
there are now a lot of nice people in our life. It’s true that honesty is more important than
money!
5.
下面短文中有10处错误, ,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
6.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起 ）不计分。
Exams have both advantages and disadvantages .As for students , they can find out shortcomings in their study and became aware of their present level in a whole class . The results of tests also help student work hard for better grades in the College Entrance Exams .And too frequent exams may result in problems . Students may have severe competition over scores and no longer be as friend as before . As for teachers ,while they can see clearly how their students master the knowledge .They suffer a lot either .It is easy work to design a good test paper ,to grade and to analyzing the students’ answers .
Tests are exams for teachers and students .Only by giving and taking them properly can it be good for students .
试卷答案
1.
Good morning!
Today, my topic is the valuable of time. Time, like the proverb says, is money. This means that
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if our time is good spent, it will turn out a lot of useful and important piece of work when the
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proper opportunity come. Although all time is precious, but the time of our youth is more precious
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than any∧period of our existence because this is the period which we can acquire knowledge and
the
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develop our abilities. If we allow these morning hours to slip away, we shall never∧able to make
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up the loss.
Let those who think nothing of waste time remember this. Thank you for your listening!
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2.
As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing was common
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between the teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do something that may hurt your
among
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mom’s feelings. Here are some suggestions. First, it’s advisable to talk less with her.
more
Heart-to-heart talks help you understand each other better. Besides, why not find more chance
chances
to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things. In these way, she may realize you
this
had grown up. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proved to your mom
have
proving
that you are already∧“Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework..
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I believe why your mom will eventually understand you and you can get along well with her.
3.
Dear Tom，
How are you getting along? I don't think this is a good idea to travel a lot and visit
it
as many place as possible．Last July Bell paid a visit on Europe．Europe was very
placebeautiful, but his holiday wasn't very nicely．He visited several countries, and was in each
nice
of the countries for only three days．He visited a good many places of interest, and
was always in∧hurry．Though he returned from Europe, he was very tired．So I suggest that
you spent your holiday in a different way．We had better travel with a friend to
spenone country and to visit only one city at a time．You' be able to have a good time.
John
4.
This morning on my way∧school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man
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was counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came running
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and knocked her down. To make things worse, his money was lying in all direction. In no
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what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked up. The old
man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy,
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there are now a lot of nice people in our life. It’s true that honesty is more important than
money!
5.
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their
few
parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find
for
part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a
students
scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay
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half of their fees because they are ∧ rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time
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job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good
teaching
at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can
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easily win a scholarship.
6.
Exams have both advantages and disadvantages .As for students , they can find out
shortcomings in their study and became aware of their present level in a whole class .
become
the
The results of tests also help student work hard for better grades in the College Entrance
students
Exams .And too frequent exams may result in problems . Students may have severe
But
competition over scores and no longer be as friend as before . As for teachers ,while
friendly
they can see clearly how their students master the knowledge .They suffer a lot either .
too
It is∧easy work to design a good test paper ,to grade and to analyzing the students’ answers .
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Tests are exams for teachers and students .Only by giving and taking them properly can
it be good for students .
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