2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错36

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.短文改错

　　Are you looking for something interested? Would you like to give a hand to other people in your spare time? Then joining us and be a volunteer! We have job for people of all ages. Anyone from students to old people can become ours members. You can help people in many ways. Some schools need volunteers to help take the care of children. Volunteers are needed in hospitals help the patients. Animal lovers can help save dogs and cats without homes. There is nothing for everyone. “I often played computer games when I was freely before. Now I help old people learn to use computers,” said a volunteer aged 18. Unless everyone helps out a lot, we’ll all have better and warmer world to live in.

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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（

　　），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

　　A Frenchman is once visiting London. He wished to take a walk to see a city. But he was afraid he might get being lost because he knew no words of English. So after he left his hotel, he stopped on the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street where he was staying.Then he walked on.At last, he got lost.In several hours he found a policeman .The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, however he knew the name of the street. He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook. It was read : “One-way street”.

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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulty. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story showed it to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

　　4.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的单词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错词下面画一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的单词。

　　注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　With the national college entrance examination approach , many students are so worried about the coming exam to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness. It’s a fairly common phenomena among us students. Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.

　　First of all, you should spend a plenty of time preparing for the test. Secondly, it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions. I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress. Last but not least, you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind. Follow my tips, but you will overcome your exam anxiety.

　　5.文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　The Siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world. It is also one of rarest. Today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the Hunchun Nature Reserve. The Chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tiger’s natural habitat. But the Siberian tiger is the only endangered species. Other famous animal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in China. The panda was the symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature. Thanks of scientists’ hard work, the number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.

　　6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线（

　　），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Alexander was a military genius or great explorer. But he also had a great ambition. He wanted to rule a country that people could live in peace with one another. From 330 to 327 BC, Alexander led his soldier east, through Afghanistan and into Central Asia. As he travel, he built more cities. He ordered soldiers, merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here.

　　In 326 BC Alexander turned south, into India. But by now his men were tired and weak. They were far home in an unknown land. The soldiers refused to go farther. Unwillingly, Alexander turned back. By 323 BC, he reached for Babylon in Iraq. There he caught fever and died at the age of 33. His country was divided between his generals.

　　试卷答案

　　1.1. interesting

　　2. join 3. jobs 4. our 5. the去掉 6. to help 7. nothing —> something 8. free 9. Unless —> If 10. have a

　　2.1.is---- was,

　　2.a----the,

　　3.being 去掉， on ---- at,

　　5.names---- name,

　　6.In----After,

　　7.explain 后加to,

　　however----yet/but,

　　9.that----what,

　　10.was去掉

　　3.

　　When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulty. The

　　ran

　　difficulties

　　main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate

　　去掉

　　everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her

　　advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I

　　advice

　　talking

　　was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story∧

　　myself

　　and

　　showed it to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class.

　　so

　　Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

　　a

　　greatly

　　4.1. approach改为approaching

　　2. so改为too

　　3. mentally改为mental

　　4. phenomona改为phenomenon

　　5. is改为are

　　6.去掉plenty前的a

　　7.it改为there

　　8. take改为taking

　　9. believe后加in

　　10. but改为and

　　5.

　　The Siberian tiger is one of the most beautiful animal in the world. It is also one

　　animals

　　of ∧rarest. Today only about 1,000 are left, some of them are in the Hunchun Nature

　　the

　　which

　　Reserve. The Chinese government has created the reserve to help saving the tiger’s

　　save

　　natural habitat. But the Siberian tiger is∧the only endangered species. Other famous

　　not

　　Another

　　animal in a danger is the giant panda, whose habitat is in China. The panda was the

　　删除

　　is

　　symbol of the World Wide Fund for Nature. Thanks of scientists’ hard work, the

　　to

　　number of the pandas lived in the wild has increased to about 1590.

　　living

　　6.

　　Alexander was a military genius or great explorer. But he also had a great

　　and

　　ambition. He wanted to rule a country that people could live in peace with one

　　where

　　another. From 330 to 327 BC, Alexander led his soldier east, through Afghanistan

　　soldiers

　　and into Central Asia. As he travel, he built more cities. He ordered soldiers,

　　traveled/travelled

　　merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here.

　　there

　　In 326 BC Alexander turned south, into India. But by now his men were tired

　　then

　　and weak. They were far ∧ home in an unknown land. The soldiers refused to

　　from

　　go farther. Unwillingly, Alexander turned back. By 323 BC, he reached for

　　去for

　　Babylon in Iraq. There he caught ∧fever and died at the age of 33. His country

　　a

　　was divided between his generals.

　　among