高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
1.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
2.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
1. 请按标准格式改错，每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Though great progress has made in science these years, there
are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living
by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school
because they have no enough money to send their children to there.
Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing
country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to
produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,
but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.
3.
短文改错
We are all busy talk about and using the Internet
76. ________
which set up in the 1960s. At first, the Internet was
77. ________
only used by the government, but in early 1970s,
78. ________
the universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to
79. ________
use it, too. Otherwise, computers were still very expensive
80. ________
and the Internet was difficult to use it. By the
81. ________
start of the 1990s, computers become cheaper and easier.
82. ________
Today it is easily to get on-line and it is said
83. ________
that millions of people use the Internet every day.
84. ________
Send e-mail is more and more popular among students.
85. ________
It has now become one of the most important parts of people’s life.
4.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
5.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
6.
文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
试卷答案
1.
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for riends
with
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
disliked
She
be
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
2.
Though great progress has∧ made in science these years, there
been
are still many people lived in poor conditions. They make their living
living
by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school
things
because they have not enough money to send their children to there.
Why∧ you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?
do
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing
in
country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to
we
produce child without limit.” Although these few words sound simple enough,
children
but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.
clearly
3.
76. talk---talking
77. set 前加was
78. early 后加the
79. 去掉the
80. Otherwise ---However
81. 去掉it
82. become 前加had
83. easily---easy
84. 85. send 改为sending
4.
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
students
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors
or
first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take
in
possible
their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the
believe
environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from
graduating或加who
leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to
choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a
cannot或can’t或后加not
good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if
we
a
5.
Dear Elli， I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me
disliked
She
be
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
6.
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of
the
full
every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am
her
allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my
be
study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.
eyes
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
watching
work
Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at
has
删除at
abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.