2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错51

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at

　　that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　2.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　3. 假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。    增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；          　2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。  also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Busisessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to -have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to. do their jobs

　　4.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　When you are traveling abroad, it is importance to follow 66_______________

　　the customs of the country where you are visiting. If you are invited

　　67_______________

　　to a home in Britain, here is some advices. As soon as you are invited,

　　68_______________

　　it is good manners to refuse or accept an invitation, either by

　　69_______________

　　writing or by telephoning. When you go the party, it is polite

　　70_______________

　　to arrive at on time. It is good manners to shake hands with your

　　71_______________

　　host and any other guest. You can take a present if you like,

　　72_______________

　　possible a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates or some flowers. 73_______________

　　However, it was not bad manners to take nothing. It is not polite

　　74_______________

　　to stay too late before the other guests have gone. Of course, 75_______________

　　it is good manners to write or telephone a day or two later to thank your host.

　　5.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在写出该加的词。把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。在错的词下划一横线，在该写出改正后的词。

　　Dear Tom,

　　It was greatly to receive your email. Now, I would like to tell you something that takes place in my school yesterday. We held ‘growing-up’ ceremony for our up-coming eighteenth birthdays. First, we both made promises that we would have a sense of duty. Then, we shows our thanks to our parents who have gone through hardships to bring you up and teachers who have educated us patiently. Finally, we put on wonderful performance, singing and dance happily. I think the activity is important too us, which I will remember it for the rest of my life.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　6.

　　文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

　　删除: 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意:

　　1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。The long-desired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announced the end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out of the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Liming and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the train we took that they had to stand. Thinking of the coming Spring Festival and the two-weeks stay with parents, we both felt exciting. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. With help of Liming, I caught the thief and force him to give back the purse to the lady. The thief was taken away by the guard. Praised by other passengers, and we felt proud of what we had done．

　　试卷答案

　　1.Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that

　　lesson

　　great

　　moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　walking

　　and

　　of my classmates. As∧ result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　a

　　worse

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　their

　　return. In this way,

　　we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　With

　　2.1. deep—deeply,

　　2. the 去掉 3. bad---worse

　　4. direction---directions或者前面all----any

　　5. rush----rushed

　　6. knowing----knowing

　　7. pick后加up

　　8.

　　missed---missing / lost

　　9. your----our

　　10. what---that

　　3.

　　略

　　4.66．importance—important

　　67. where改为which/that或去掉

　　68．advices—advice

　　69．an—the

　　70． the 前加to

　　71．去掉at

　　72．∨

　　73．possible—possibly

　　74．was—is

　　75．before—after

　　略

　　5.

　　Dear Tom,

　　It was greatly to receive your email. Now, I would like to tell you something that takes

　　great

　　took

　　place in my school yesterday. We held ∧‘growing-up’ ceremony for our up-coming eighteenth

　　a

　　birthdays. First, we both made promises that we would have a sense of duty. Then, we shows our

　　all

　　showed

　　thanks to our parents who have gone through hardships to bring you up and teachers who have

　　us

　　educated us patiently. Finally, we put on wonderful performance, singing and dance happily. I think

　　performances

　　dancing

　　the activity is important too us, which I will remember it for the rest of my life.

　　to

　　Yours,

　　Li Ming

　　6.

　　arrived 前的was去掉;

　　announced 改成announcing;

　　late 改成later

　　Such改成 So

　　they 改成we;

　　two-weeks 改成two-week

　　exciting 改成excited;

　　help 前加the ;

　　force改成forced

　　and去掉