2016广西柳江县高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（1）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
【参考答案】1.
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old
deeply
man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and
knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people
worse
directions/all 改any
around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.
rushed
knowing
Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the
up
money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of
missing /lost
nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
our
that
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The way of communication in people’s life has changed a lot of in recent years. In the past, people keep in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or use the public telephone. But now almost everyone have a mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access the Internet, it enables them to send and accept e-mails whenever they like. With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficiently. It used to take them several days to hear from each other, and now it takes only several minutes, even if we are in two different continents.
【参考答案】2.
1. a lot of中的of去掉 2. keep—kept
3. use—using
4. have—has
5. access后加to 6. it—which
7. accept—receive
8. efficiently—efficient
9. and—but
10. we—they
短文改错
I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gate I happen to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years. After that, we went boating in a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write each other in the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very gladly to have a chance to practice my oral English.
【参考答案】3.
1. happen—happened
2. America—American
3. him—them
4. travel—travelling
5. with去掉 6. been去掉 7. in—on
8. address—addresses
9. wirte后加to 10. gladly—glad
【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.
【参考答案】短文改错：
71. ... am interested at ... at → in
72. ... to keep health. health → healthy
73. ... was to swim ... was → is
74. ... is very bored ... bored → boring
75. ... but I still work ... 去掉but
76. Because my hard work ... my前加of
77. ... in much important ... much → many
78. ... lot of friends ... lot → lots或lot前加a
79. ... friends which are ... which → who / that
80. ... practise like you ... you → me
When we feel sad or happily, a good cry is almost
76.
impossible to resist. But do you know why we cry?
77.
Experts have found that tear contain some chemicals 78.
like hormone. When one is feeling stressed, it set free,
79.
tears will come down. So crying is a way of get
80.
rid of the stress and you will often feel better before a
81.
good cry. Of course sex has nothing to do to crying.
82.
Women cry more often just because of they have more
83.
of this hormone than men. But next time you feel like
84.
bursting into tears, go ahead. It won't good to your health.
85.
【参考答案】
76．happily → happy。feel后用形容词作表语。
77．√
78．tear → tears。动词contain为复数形式，主语也应为复数形式。
79．it后加is。此处应用被动语态。
80．get → getting。of为介词，后面应接动名词作宾语。
81．before → after。哭后的感觉比哭前好。
82．to → with。
83．去掉of。从句不可用because of而应用because来引导。
84．But → So。分析语境逻辑可知，此处不表转折关系。
85．won't → will．