2016广西柳江县高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（2）
短文改错 One Sunday morning, there were much people in the park. In a shop, a woman was buying an ice-cream while a young man behind her took his handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! He’s robbed me from my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sit quietly on a bench nearby, reading a newspaper. As the robber was running passed him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put between the robber’s legs. The young man fell down on the ground hardly. Soon two policeman came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked for the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.
【参考答案】4.
1. much—many
2. while—when
3. his—her
4. from—of
5. sit—sitting
6. passed—past
7. put后加it 8. hardly—hard
9. policeman—policemen
10. thanked后的for去掉
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at
that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help
of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We
can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in
return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
【参考答案】5.
Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that
lesson
great
moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had
had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help
walking
and
of my classmates. As∧ result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We
a
worse
can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in
their
return. In this way,
we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
With
【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2015·江西省八所重点中学高三联考)
It is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we hold a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about them.
Some think it necessarily. Firstly, with cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.
Personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.
答案：
It is reported that thirty cellphones
taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we
a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about .
Some think it . Firstly,
cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk . Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing,
the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.
Personally ， even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them
than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.
1．taken前加were cellphones是take的动作承受者，应用被动语态。故taken前加were。
2．hold→held 根据语境应用过去时，故hold改为held。
3．them→it 此处代词是代替前文的discussion。故them改为it。
4．necessarily→necessary think 后跟形容词作宾补，故necessarily应改为necessary。
5．with→without 根据句意，应是“没有手机，学生将能集中注意力上课”。故with改为without。
6．message→messages message是可数名词，前没有限定词，应用复数形式，故message改为messages。
7．the others前的the去掉 与前文的some对应，用others，故去掉the。
8．at→in in the age of information“在信息时代”，故应将at改为in。
9．spoken→speaking personally speaking“在我看来”。故spoken改为speaking。
10．more→rather rather than而不是。
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
【参考答案】6.
1. deep—deeply,
2. the 去掉 3. bad---worse
4. direction---directions或者前面all----any
5. rush----rushed
6. knowing----knowing
7. pick后加up
8.
missed---missing / lost
9. your----our
10. what---that
短文改错
The other day after work，I was walking down the street
I saw a boy riding a unicycle，one of those
with only one wheel.
in all pink from head to toe，he was singing a song which
was——
sounded like a kid’s song.I thought he must be
crazy.Just then，a lady dropped
20dollar bill on the ground，but
didn’t realize it and started to walk away.The guy in pink picked
the money and gave it back to her.After that，he rode on
soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. a strange and good guy!
短文改错(假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra
happen
去掉to
crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop,
when
and
but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t
his
badly
move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police
what
arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and
sent
policemen
wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
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