2016广西柳江县高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（5）
短文改错
Dear Jim,
I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.
You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.
I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】1.
Dear Jim,
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school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
短文改错。此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要进行修改，请打（√）表示。
Today was like some other day in my life. In the morning,
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the weather was awful, which made me to feel unhappy.
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And I had to go to the bookstore to buy some books. When
I come into the bookstore, the shop assistant told me that
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they didn’t have the books. So I had to go to others
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bookstores, so they didn’t have the books, either. I spent
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the whole morning look for the books in different bookstores,
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and on the way, I wasted much time, which made me very
angry. Finally, to my joy, I found out the books and bought
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it. In the afternoon, I read some books, and when I
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finished reading, I felt tiring. In the evening, I went to
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take a shower and washed my clothes. Washing clothes is a
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little hard for me. However, I think it’s a kind of exercise.
【参考答案】2.
76. some改为any
77. 去掉to
78. come改为came
79. others改为other
80. so改为but
81. look 改为 looking
82. 去掉out
83. it改为them
84. tiring 改为tired
85. √
短文改错。
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
We received Tom’s letter dating May 20th the day 76. __________
before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to 77. __________
learn how he is getting along very well with his lessons 78. __________
Time passes very quick．In
a few
weeks， he'll finish 79. __________
the high school. What pleases us most is that he does 80. __________
very well to make up his mind to enter for the college 81. __________
entrance examination this summer．What wonderful it is! 82. __________
Dad，as well as Mom and I ，is with him．We expected 83. __________
him to make better use of his time． The full preparations 84. __________
he makes，the surer of successful he’ll certainly be . 85. __________
3.
76.dated
77.greatly前加are
78.how→that
79.quickly
80.去掉the
81. √
82.What→How
83.expected→expect
84.full→fuller
85. successful--success
（全国新课标卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a
buying
ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to
there
Xiamen for∧ long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag
A
and
Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my
money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very
in
were
strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to
luggage
friend’s
me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
felt
短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行作出判断如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in
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a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study
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better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,
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photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons
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and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but
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unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a
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little money, it can make our school a nicer place.
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参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy
67. we后加are
68. thought→think
69. in→on
70 去are或are→be
71.正确
72.that→which
73.work→works
74. unless→if
75. it→we
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。and played his violin with large piece of paper on
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the ground．Before long , he was surrouning with people, who
78._____
were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night,
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a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please 80._____
come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people wondered why it could
81.____
be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought
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back his lottery(彩票)
which won a reward of ＄500,000. Later someone asked the violinist:
83._____
“ Why don’t you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,
84._____
“While I don’t have much money, I live happily. However , I lose
85._____
honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”
短文改错：
76.第一个at改为on
77.with后加a
78.surrouning改为surrounded
79.word改为words
80.mistaken改为mistake
81.why改为what
82.brought改为took
83.reward改为prize 84.don’t改为didn’t
85.if后加I