第3讲 问题观点类 【典例】(2015·浙江高考)
在班级活动中, 当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时, 你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人, 还是尊重大多数同学的意见? 请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题, 用英文写一篇短文。要求如下:
1. 从以上两种做法中选择一种;
2. 以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。 When I Have a Different Opinion ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题思路】 第一步: 依体裁谋篇章 结构对 第一关 内容 观点不一致时怎么办 段落 第一段描述观点并提出自己的观点; 第二段阐述观点理由; 第三段进一步阐述自己的观点, 做到首尾呼应 第二步: 列要点选句式 要点全 及格线 要点一: 观点不一致时我的做法______________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _________ 要点二: 叙述具体事例支持论点___________________________________ _________ 要点三: 再次阐述自己的观点_________________________________ _______________ We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. It is my opinion that good opinions are worth sticking to. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句 句式美 优秀分 要点一拓展: 添加选择坚持观点的理由 ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly. 要点二拓展: 添加讨论的过程、结果 ________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 要点三拓展: 添加选择坚持观点的理由 _______________________________________________________________ ____________ Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates preferred to go to a park while I created an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates to accept my idea. It is my opinion that good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all. 【现场阅卷·作文升格】 学 生 答 卷 我 来 阅 卷 该生习作为三档作文, 得分为15分。虽漏掉一些内容, 但覆盖所有主要内容; 原文词数略少, 只有90词; 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误; 描述过去的事情时, 一定要用过去时; 句子结构相对简单。 1. 第一句has应改为have, 此处主语是people, 谓语动词应用复数形式。 2. 第二句insist应改为insist on, insist on意为“坚持”。 3. 第三句truth应改为true, 此处为表语, 故用形容词形式较好。 4. 第四、五、六和七句, 把相应的动词都改为过去式。 5. 第四句have应改为was, there be. . . 是固定句型。 6. 第六句think后添加what, 此句为复合句, think后为宾语从句, 且从句中又含一个主语从句, do后缺宾语, 故用what连接。 五 档 作 文 When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates preferred to go to a park while I created an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates to accept my idea. We did have a good time that day.
It is my opinion that good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
一、问题观点类作文的三段式解题技巧
1. 首段提出问题。主要用来写当前的某个社会问题。
2. 中段论述观点。如果是解决问题, 提出切实可行的解决方案, 忌措施太偏激; 如果是对立观点, 描述正方和反方的观点, 论述时可以加上理由。
3. 末段表述个人观点。通过讲事实, 摆道理, 态度鲜明, 直接表达自己的观点和主张。事实材料可以是具体的事例、概括的事实、统计数字、前人的经典著作、至理名言、民间的谚语和俗语、科学上的公理、规律等。 二、问题观点类常用词汇、句型及模板 (一)常用词汇 1. recommend vt. 推荐2. forbid vt. 禁止 3. misunderstand vt. 误解 4. reflect vt. 反映; 映射 5. mainly adv. 主要地
6. reasonable adj. 合情合理的 7. additionally adv. 另外 8. personally adv. 就自己而言 9. proposal n. 提议
10. communication n. 交流 11. in favor of支持
12. be against反对 13. instead of相反; 代替 14. be divided into two groups被分成两组 15. in addition to除了……之外 16. arouse sb. ’s curiosity激发某人的好奇心 17. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 18. agree with sb. ’s idea同意某人的观点 19. in sb. ’s opinion/as far as sb. be concerned依照某人的观点 20. gain confidence获得自信 21. be of great significance很有意义 22. cause great concern引起广泛关注 23. share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物 24. advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事 25. rather than而不是 26. put too much pressure on sb. 给某人太多压力 27. have different attitudes towards对……持不同态度 28. be supposed to do sth. 理应做某事 29. adopt a positive/negative attitude采取积极/消极的态度 30. be based on基于 (二)常用句型 1. 精彩开头 ①(2015浙江高考)We may have different opinions on organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. 在……方面我们可能有不同的观点。 ②(2015·江苏高考)The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack, which not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. ……很难解决, 这不仅……而且…… ③(2016·江苏高考)Today, there is a widespread concern over the issue that more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. 今天, ……成为广泛关注的议题。 ④(2016·广东高考)Some people don’t like their jobs not because they are lazy but because their jobs are small.
一些人不……不是因为……而是因为…… 2. 正文佳句 ①(2015·重庆高考)Of the two, the latter wins my favor.
在这两者中, 我更喜欢后者。 ②(2015·四川高考)Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.
……对于……是非常重要的, 通过这个你一定可以…… ③(2015·江苏高考)Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. 有几件事情导致了交通问题。 ④(2016·江苏高考)Some people support it while others are against it. 一些人支持它, 然而其他人反对它。 ⑤(2016·四川高考)It is my opinion that making a suitable timetable is necessary and important for us to make good use of time. 我的观点是…… 3. 余味结尾 ①(2015·江苏高考)It is everybody’s duty to observe the traffic rules to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
……是我们每一个人的责任。 ②(2016·江苏高考)So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.
因此, 我们不难推出……是合情合理的。 ③(2016·广东高考)As long as there is kindness and virtue, the world will become more beautiful. 只要有……, 世界将变得…… ④(2016·广东高考)Personally, I believe that workers should be paid better.
依我之见, 我认为…… (三)常用模板 1. 问题类作文模板
In recent days, we have to face________(问题), which is becoming more and more serious. First, ________(说明现状). Second, ________(举例进一步说明现状).
Faced with the problem, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with the situation. For one thing, ________(解决方法一). For another________(解决方法二). Finally, ________(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that________(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because________(带来的好处).
2. 观点类作文模板
Different people have different views on________. Some people think that________, while others argue that________. (提出两种观点) As far as I am concerned, I agree with the________opinion. In the first place, ________. In the second place, ________. Finally, ________. (明确表明自己同意某种观点并提出理由)
Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that________. Only if________can we________. (结论) 3. 批驳类作文模板
Recently, it seems that________. Many people, especially________, think that it will certainly do good to ________ because________. Moreover, ________. (说明某种做法及支持这种做法的观点)
After careful consideration, I have to say________. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, ________. (从几方面进行批驳) We can see clearly that although ________ may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It is obvious that________. (结论)