2016届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题07 建议申请话题指导
实例指导1—求职申请
【写作任务】
注意：
1．词数120左右。
2．可以适当增加细节，以使短文连贯。
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【思路指导】
求职申请的信件是一种应用文，一份出色的求职申请的信件是得到理想职位的关键。这类文章一般具有以下特点：
1．时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，有时会用到一般将来时。
2．人称相对统一，主要采用第一人称。
3．文章主要叙述真实情况，而不需要发表评论。
写求职申请的信件一般采用以下几个步骤：
第一，明确提出自己所应聘的职位，然后介绍自己的基本情况，如年龄、性别、学历、所学专业或技术特长等。
第二，写自己的简单经历，着重写教育和工作经历，如：在何单位从事过去何种工作、业绩如何、受过何种培训等，切记不可浮夸或隐瞒。
第三，阐述自己能胜任此项工作的理由，尽可能写得详细、充分。注意要谦虚、客观，不要夸夸其谈或信誓旦旦。
第四，写清自己的联系地址、电话及联系时间。
这类文章的写作，通常要注意以下几点：
1．直入主题。解释你为什么写这封求职信并表明你感兴趣的职位。还可以说一下你是在哪儿得知工作信息的。
2．一封求职信是你向雇主证明你是最好人选的好机会，因此确定该职位的技能要求是重要的一步。必须看清招聘广告上所列出的每项要求，再将自己的学历、能力与兴趣逐一与其比较，然后，具体介绍你以前和这些技能相关的工作经历，最后表明自己的信心。
【词语搜索】
apply; committee; protect the environment;
volunteer; serious; unhealthy, rubbish;
duty; take care of; realize; problem, solve; civilized; friendly; reasonable ; polite; manner; behavior
【句型搜索】
I would like to... (我愿意……);
As far as I'm conemed... (就我而言……) Only 1. 本文要求写一封求职信。既然是写求职信,应包括该用人消息的来源和个人的基本情况。个人信息、工作经历、个人技能等个人基本情况已经以表格的形式给出,这些将是你的习作的主要内容所在。如何安排这几个方面,孰轻孰重,也有讲究。根据所给材料可知你已工作两年,那么重点阐述你的优势以及自己的潜能,才是这封信的核心部分。另外,说明招聘信息的来源也很必要,题目中已经明确给出信息:该招聘广告登载在报纸上。 2. 本写作要求是写一封信,因此首先要注意书信的格式。不妨分下面几部分完成该习作:第一部分:开头称呼语及说明该招聘消息的来源,引出话题。第二部分:主体部分,即介绍你的情况。第三部分:结束语。 3. 求职信属于正式信函,开头称呼应为:Dear Sir / Madame。在行文上要注意使用礼貌用语,如开头时写I would love to work in your company. 等。结尾时写I’d appreciate it if you can call me or write back to me. 或者Thank you for your attention! 之类的话,让读信者感到求职者的礼貌和真诚。 其次,在介绍自己的情况的时候要注意句子之间的联系,使用必要的连接语,如:and, what’s more, besides 或者表示顺序的词语,如:firstly, ... finally 等等,让文章连贯通顺。要长短句交替使用,正确使用并列句和复合句以使文章避免单调,错落有致。 最后,在打草稿的时候注意千万不能遗漏要点,因为这是要扣分的。
实例指导2—征求建议
【写作任务】
假如你是Amy，你所在的城市要修一座地铁，现在面向社会广泛征求意见。作为一名中学生，请你给设计师写封信告诉他你的建议；希望他至少能考虑以下几点，并说明你的理由：
1．地铁的入口和出口标牌要醒目；
Dear Sir / Madam,
I heard that you are the architect of the new subway. Here, I'd like to offer you my suggestions.
First, the entrance and exit to the Subway should be accessible to anyone. To our disappointment, ① find the subway in many big cities often takes much time , just ②because of the entrances and exits are hidden at some corner of the street. Worse still, directing signs can't stand out compared to Others. Second, traditional steps to the subway should be replaced by lifts. For one thing, it can save passengers much time; for another , it will be convenient for those with special needs, such as the disabled.
I sincerely hope that you will take my advice into consideration!
【教师点评】
1． 亮点点击：文章格式正确，要点齐全，第一句开门见山点出文章的主旨。此外，作者使用了定语从句等负杂句型和不少短语，如be accessible to ; take time；stand out；compared to；be convenient for；take…into consideration等，并且句与句之间的衔接得当，如to our disaapointment；for one thing ，for another等短语的恰当运用。
2．误点点拨：①find 改为finding 。此处是现在分词短语作主语。②去掉of , because of不可接句子，只可接名词或名词短语，此句改为：because the entrances and exists are hidden at some corner of the street。
3．画龙点睛：To our disappointment, finding the subway in many big cities often takes much time , just because the entrances and exits are hidden at some corner of the street.句虽然用了连接短语，但不够简洁，可改为It often annoys us so much to make great efforts to find the hidden entrances and exits at some unknown corner.
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/ Madame
I am writing this letter for the purpose of making some suggestions for the subway that will be built. For a smoothly-flowing subway I would like to suggest the following.
First, more outstanding entrances and exits to subway stations should be provided. It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street. Besides, directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisements. Second, it would be better to replace traditional steps with lifts to make it convenient for the elders and even for the disabled．Furthermore，lifts help save time．
Looking forward to the improvement of the subway and wishing you all the success．
Yours sincerely，
Amy
【佳句欣赏】
1. For a smoothly-flowing subway I would like to suggest the following.
2. It is usual that entrances and exits are hard to find since they are almost hidden at the corner of the street.
3. Besides, directing signs are easily left unnoticed because of many advertisement
实例指导3—如何写好规劝性质的书信
【范文欣赏】
Dear Lili ,
Glad to hear from you . I just want to share with you how I'm getting on well with my English study.
First of all, you should know clearly what you study for. As we know, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. To be a capable person in your future life, you must learn English well.
Secondly , I think the basic thing to do is to memorize as many English words as possible. When you come across new words, you should write them down again and again .
Thirdly , you should read out English texts loudly every morning, learn phrases, useful expressions and sentence patterns. They are helpful in improving speaking and writing as well.
Last , grammar is also very important. You ought to listen to the teacher' s lectures carefully in class. When you have trouble, you must ask for help in time .
Yours faithfully
Xumin
Dear Sir / Madam.
I am writing jo suggest that our government should set up a special agency to provide more job opportunities for the disabled With the increase m competition for jobs, it is easy for the government to ignore the needs of these individuals.
Admittedly, there has been much improvement made for them. However, it is far from enough. Though they may be different in many ways, they, in fact, want to make contributions to society just like any of us, to prove their worth to our country. And one of the suggestions is to train them to learn some skills for free. Only in this way can they achieve their dreams and feel good about themselves not just as individuals but citizens of the country.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
加入你是一名残疾学校的学生王兵，你们城市准备建造新的体育馆，你写信给建筑师李先生，提供一些建议，期中也包括一些有利于残疾人的建议。注意：
1．在城市的北面，那里方便。
2．至少要放下2万人。
3．要留给残疾人座位和通道。
体育馆：gymnasium
字数：120－150 。
【思路指导】
1．在历年高考中，英语试题中的书面表达题考查最多的应用文为书信形式。而内容有很多又是关于很多疑惑问题的请教或解答。
2．故掌握英文书信的写法对考生来讲非常必要。英文书信，通常包括以下个部分，即：信头、称呼、正文、谦称和结束语、签名。student in a disability school . It is very glad for me to have a chance to write to you, a famous architect.
I hear a big gymnasium will be put up in our city and you are the leading architect . As a sport fan , I want to give suggestions to you . Firstly , I think it should be in the north of the city , as it is convenient for citizens ,especially for our disabled men . Secondly , I think it will be good if it is a very big , and I think it can hold over 20,000 people . Last , the important suggestion , it should have many seats for our disabled sports fans , and it should there be a way for us to enter the gymnasium.
I heartily wish you may consider my these suggestions . And I am looking forward to the wonderful gymnasium.
Yours,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I'm writing in response to your advertisement for the position of Sales Manager.
I will graduate from Peking University in the coming July, majoring in Marketing Management. I have ever worked for half a year in the marketing field as an intern in a computer company. I have an outgoing personality and I am good at communicating with people from all walks of life both in fluent English and Chinese. Besides, I'm skillful in operating computers. I believe my solid educational experience and practical work experience can make me a perfect fit for this position.
I'll appreciate it if you can give me a chance for an interview and we can discuss this position further. I can be reached at 010,12345678. I'm looking forward at hearing from you soon.
Yours faithful
Wang Jun
Dear Mr. Wang,
I'm glad to know that our school radio station will choose one broadcaster recently. I'm a student
from senior two, and now I'm writing to apply for the
position.
I'm fond of the work of broadcasting and I am willing to serve all of our schoolmates, providing them with wonderful English programs over the radio. First of all, I'm good at English, especially at spoken English. I won the first prize for the School Spoken English Contest last year. In addition, when I was in primary school, I worked for the school radio station, which gained me rich experience in this field. Therefore , I'm sure to get along well with my work if I can get the chance..
Yours,
Li Hua
写作任务：
假如你是杨倩，看到报纸上某公司招聘英文秘书的广告，于是想去该公司应聘，请根据下列表格中的个人情况写一封求职信。要求包括所有内容，词数120左右。
个人信息 姓名 性别 年龄 身高 文化程度
杨倩 女 28 1.66m 英语专业学士(bachelor)
工作经历 曾在一家公司当过两年秘书
个人技能 英语口语流利，英语书写水平高，能看懂各种英文资料；会操作电脑，每分钟打字130个；性格热情、开朗，善于与人沟通。
联系方式 Tel: 010-89347521 E-mail: yangqian@sina.com
Dear Sir / Madame,
Having read your ad in the newspaper, I hope to get the job as an English secretary in your company. My name is Yang Qian, a healthy girl of 28 and I am 1.66 meters tall. I am the Bachelor of English, and can speak fluent English and can write in English as well as read all kinds of articles in English. What’ s more, skillful in operating Words, I can type 130 words per minute. With two years’ relevant experience in a company, I could make myself generally useful, if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services. As an open, warm-hearted and easy-going person, I hope I am