2016届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题03 辩论对比话题指导
实例指导1—如何写好辩论式书面表达
More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it …
【写作思路】
本文为辩论式议论文。其格式和结构为：第一段，综述辩论的内容(本文已经给出)；第二段，表述正方观点及理由；第三段，表述反方观点及理由；第四段，陈述自己的观点。
【写作指导】
Is Training
Class
Or
Family
Teacher Necessary?
More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some think it necessary．It’s effect view to study with a teacher than by themselves．It can strengthen what is learnt in the class．They can learn a lot more.
Some think it unnecessary．Students can easily become dependent．Students need time to relax from time to time．The purpose of many training classes and teachers is making money.
h my opinion，if a training class or family teacher is needed depends . If you are really very weak or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste
time and money.
【教师点评】
本文结构完整，段落清晰，要点齐全。时态使用正确，均用一般现在时。简单句、复合句交替使用，非谓语动词的使用均给本文增色不少。不足之处是两个观点的理由部分显得有些松散，没有用相关的过渡词，此外也出现了一些语法和搭配方面的错误。
因为后面有than by themselves，所以effective 要用比较级，前面要加上more。
in class 意思为“在课堂上”，class前不加冠词。
表示“一些……，一些……”，用some…，others 来表示。
④动词原形不可以作表语，要用to make或making。
⑤if应改为whether，因为if不可引导主语从句。
⑥ be weak at中的at不可以省去，因为后面有宾语a certain subject。
【优秀范文】
Is Training
Class
Or
Family
Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends, There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary . For one thing , students can easily become dependent.
For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What's more, the purpose of many training classes and family teachers is to make money.
Personally, I think, whether a training class or family teacher is needed depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it's OK for you . But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, Otherwise it would be a waste of time and money .
实例指导2—是否参加培训班
1．对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写这类体裁的作文时，常使用一般现在时。
2．写作的步骤厂般是：提出问题+阐述两种不同观点，并举例说明+总结自己的观点。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由。
①Opinions are divided on the questions ./
Opinions differ.
②Each coin has two sides.
③Some people are in favor of
the opinion / Others hold the view that...
④ Others are against the point. / Others argue the view that… / Some people disagree with that.
2．误点点拨：…a according to their own situation, children decide to attend the training classes.．表达欠妥，可改为：Whether children attend the trainlng classes should depend on their own situation.
3．画龙点睛：文章中Some people agree with it．和Somepeoplc disagree with it两个句子，使人感觉语言比较贫乏，可改为：Some people hold the view．和Some people are against the view.
【参考范文】
Nowadays, many children are sent to attend varieties of training classes by their parents during their holidays. As to this, opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
On the one hand, people who are in favor of it hold the view that it is good for children to attend those classes. They think it can make children versatile. At the same time, they believe that attending training classes Would make children more excellent than others. Besides, children can enjoy every day. On the other hand, others are against the view. In their opinion, the burden of study on children is too heavy, so they wouldn't fully master what they have learned in their training classes. What's worse, they haven't enough 'time to take a rest.
As far as I am concerned, whether they should attend the training classes depends on children themselves. It is better.to arrange their study according to their own needs and make full use of the holidays.
实例指导3―电子游戏
【写作任务】
中学生玩电子游戏非常普遍。加入你是班长王军，你通过在校内进行调研，调查的结果如下表，现在要求你根据调查内容，你写了一个调查分析报告，寄给报社。(字数120左右)
一些同学认为 大部分同学认为 调查后得出结论
中学生玩电子游戏可以提高反应速度，促进智力发展。
中学生花太多时间玩游戏对身体健康和学习有害。
玩游戏是一种娱乐活动，在有足够的自制力的情况下，适当放松也未尝不可。
【思路点拨】
这类文章主要以图表为主，要求学生对数据、文字内容进行分析，要系统、准确地表达出来含义和内容。写作特点主要有：
1）按照对照项目逐项进行客观性描写。这类作文一般是客观介绍、解释或说明事物的异同点，使读者获得知识和信息，一般不需要作者发表个人看法。
2）行文的条理性和语言的准确性，这类文章不单要求行文逻辑严密，语言简明扼要。切忌含糊其辞、模棱两可。
3）根据写作要求说明要比较对象的同点。注意恰当使用表示相反或对比关系的衔接词，使段落和全文的语义连贯。
4）本文的时态应，一般过去时、一般现在时为主。本篇书面表达描写时可分以下几步：
Dear editors ,
As is shown in the table , computer games have become very popular in recent years. Whenever you go, you can see middle school students playing the games in clubs, stores or at home. Obviously , the game give great pleasure and satisfaction.
Some students think that the games can train them to respond to things quickly , improve their mind as well as interesting in science . But the mass think that the students spend too much time playing the games , which certainly does harm to their health and study .
In my opinion, computer games are a kind of wonderful entertainment . If you have enough self-control ability , you can get pleasure and benefit from them.
Your ,
Wang Jun
Are Paintings Worth Buying?
About buying paintings, different people have different ideas. Many people think that buying paintings is waste① of money. They say that the money could better spend②on more useful things. On the contrary, others think paintings are worth buying. They say paintings can give them
many pleasures③. What' s more, they can earn money by buying or selling paintings.
Personally, I think we can buy some paintings on a ④condition that we have much money. I think a big advantage of buying paintings is that people can get lots of fun and pleasure in enjoying paintings. But like any other investment, there is no guarantee which ⑤you will make huge profits by buying paintings.
So, the best piece of advice I Could give will be -- buy to enjoy!
【教师点评】
1．总体许价：
作者能根据本文特点进行组材， 按照内容提示写出了不同人对于买画的不同观点，并发表了自己的看法，所写文章符合写作要求。作者所采用的句式结构灵活多变，全文的表达也很通顺，具有很强的可读性。美中不足的是文中出现了几处小错误。
2．亮点或采分点：
用了一些较复杂句式，如：宾语从句，表语从句和状语从句等，这些结构的使用提升了文章的档次。
3．错误更正：
①waste前加a。a waste of意为“浪费”。
②better spend改为be better spent。根据句子结构，这儿应用被动结构。
③many pleasures改为much pleasure。pleasure当“乐趣”讲时，是不可数名词。
④去掉a。“以……为条件”是on condition that…。
⑤which改为出that。guarantee后接的是同位语从句，而不是定语从句。
【参考范文】
Are Paintings Worth Buying?
About buying paintings, different people have different ideas. Many people think that buying paintings is a waste of money. They say that the money could be better spent on more useful things. On the contrary, others think paintings are worth buying. They say paintings can give them much pleasure. What' s more, they can earn money by buying or selling paintings.
Personally, I think we can buy some paintings on condition that we have much money, I think a big advantage of buying paintings is that people can get lots of fun and pleasure in enjoying paintings. But like any other investment, there is no guarantee that you will make huge profits by buying paintings.
So, the best piece of advice I could give will be -- buy to enjoy!
实例指导5— 如何礼貌地解释
【写作任务】
加入你是迈克，在一家小的公司上班，现在你打算离开这家公司，请你用150词左右来给你的老板希尔先生解释你离开的原因。
1. 希望在贸易方面，能获得更广泛的经验。 照顾住在远地的年老母亲，而申请辞职。 由于希望获得更高的职位负更多的责任，而离开现职。Reasons for leaving
Dear Mr. Will ,
I am sorry to tell you that I will leave our company …
Dear Mr. Will ,
I am sorry to tell you that I will leave our company . With the help of you I have had a good time here , so I really don’t want to leave here , but for some reasons I have to make the decision.
Firstly , I think the main reason is that I am determined to get much more experience in trading . After all , our company is still a developing company , and I have not many chances to improve myself in treading .
Secondly , I am leaving our company to be with my mother and care for my aged mother in a distant city. She has been very ill for a long time , so she needs looking after very much .
Lastly , of course , I want to improve my position and have more responsibility in another company .
I wish you can accept my application . Thank you !
Yours,
【写作指导首先主题，然后分别说明意见及其理由，最后说出自己的看法和结论。该文以表格形式出现，讨论的话题是地震灾区人民是否应该接受社会援助。normal quickly. Finally, the aid has brought endless hope to us for one year.
However, some students are against it . First , although we suffered a lot from the earthquake ,our spirit is still alive. Besides, it is lucky that we are still alive , so we should do some things that we can . What’s more , in order to get this aid , some people are under great pressure, which has a bad effect on them.
In my opinion , we should do the work mainly by ourselves, not simply depending on others. Only in this way can we make our hometown more beautiful with. the aid from society
【教师点评】
1. 文章结构安排合理。全文分四个自然段。第一自然段提出要讨论的问题,再用Different students have different opinions过渡。二、三自然段采用总分式，先点出主题句，然后进行说理。第四自然段点出自己观点。
2. 以理服人。由于有以上的结构安排，加上合理发挥，对于是否接爱社会援助有明确信息。
3. 语言生动，具有较强的针对性，这正是对比性文体不可缺少的特点。如第一自然段的过渡句，第三自然段中which引导的定语从句，及结尾的Only开头的倒装句。同时全文使用了许多副词、形容词（如possible, quickly, lucky, mainly, simply等）更加强了这种针对性的语气，而however, in my opinion, only in this way等短语衔接上下文，使全文浑然一体。
4.恰当地运用相关典句，为全文增添了不少亮点。
实战演练
自“神九”返回以后，人们就“普通人去太空旅行”的话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表的提示，以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel ”为题写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文，并简要地发表你自己的观点。
太空旅行的益处
太空旅行的弊端
1．提供居住的新场所
2．给人类提供新能源
3．对人们更好地了解其他领域有好处 1．花费太大
2．人类住在其他星球上的想法不切实际
3．太空旅行有危险
你的看法
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Space Travel
There are several advantages of space travel . First of all, it could provide man with new places to live and new sources of energy. In addition, space travel helps people understand the universe better. Also space travel research is good for other research fields.
However, space travel also has some disadvantages. On one hand, it costs too much money which could be spent in other aspects. On the other hand, the idea of people living on other planets is unrealistic. What's more, space travel could be dangerous, too.
Nowadays, it has become more and more popular for drivers to talk on the cellphone while driving. But through the survey we did, we found that people have different Opinions about this practice.
Among those persons we interviewed, 30% agree with this practice. They say that being a modern means of communication, the cellphone is convenient and fast, especially if you-have something important to say. While the majority surveyed, about 70% are against the practice, saying that it is dangerous to talk on the cellphone while driving, and can cause accidents easily.
In my opinion, it would be better for drivers not to use the cellphone while driving for his safety and others'. If they do have something important to say, they should stop to talk.
随着社会的发展，音乐和我们的生活息息相关，作为音乐中的一员——摇滚音乐，给人们的生活带了是好还是坏的影响呢？2007年3月6日我班分为两
March 6th, 2007
Fine
Today our class had a heated discussion about rock-n-roll in two groups. We realize that, with the development of society, music has been closely connected with people’s life. Rock-n-roll music is a branch of music. But is it good or bad?
55% of the students think rock-n-roll music is a kind of popular music that spreads widely throughout the world, reflecting characteristics of the changing times. It is a form of extremely good expressiveness through tunes and words. Not only learned people but also common persons can enjoy it, for it’s a lively way of free communications.
However, 45% of the students think that listeners might get too nervous and excited to relax themselves at the thrilling music. What’s more, lacking cultural context often makes it hard for it to stand long tasting.
In my opinion, some well-done rock-n-roll is very popular, but some will make people tired, so we should develop rock-n-roll music properly.