2016届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题02 报道评论话题指导
实例指导1――如何写影评
本文属于影评，即个人看完电影后对电影的看法与评价。写影视评论宜从小处着手，深入挖掘。见解力求独到、新颖、深刻。电影评论的写作难度明显高于普通书面表达，因为它要求考生首先必须掌握电影大意，进而运用准确的语言进行客观叙述。要写好电影评论，考生必须掌握一定的写作技巧。
1．深刻理解大意，了解作文要求。了解大意足写好评论的基本要求，同时也是关键所在；而了解作文要求，才知道写作的任务是什么，不然就会出现“答非所问”的现象。
2．根据作文要求，列出写作提纲。明确写作要求和了解大意后，下一步即是对照情节列出要点。
3．合理发挥想象，有机地组织语言。本篇写作可分三段来写：第一段总概影片，言简意赅；第二段根据提示和列好的提纲，进行简单描述，力求简明扼要，语言生动。让读者能够了解电影的主要故事情节。第三段揭示该片的人物主题和现实意义——每当我们坚守一个信念并为之付出努力，我们就会获得成功。
此文所涉及的词汇和句型有received
3. put on
4.faithful
5. exist
6. stick to
7. Luckily for sb.
8. get a reward
9. invite sb. to do
10. so he did
11. come true
12. congratulate sb. on th.
【语句成篇现在，文章所需的基本已经初步完成，将各要点表达出来，注意谓语动词的适当变化形式，以增加语言的表达力随后我们要，使全文结构紧凑使整个段落或篇章浑然一体，连贯流畅moment it was put on .
The story goes like this. Crouse is a faithful boy, who believes that Santa Claus is really living in the world. But his parents and friends insist that Santa Claus does not exist. Facing all this, Crouse still sticks to his faith firmly. Luckily for him, all his faith got a reward. One Christmas eve, a huge polar express stopped in front of his house. The conductor invited him to go to the North Pole to visit Santa Claus, and so he did ?
Santa Claus really exists in this world. fSo have a good wish in your mind, and believe that if you stick to it, it will surely come true, and Santa Claus will send us wonderful gifts, congratulating us on our success. Santa Claus lives in our hearts!
【佳句背诵May I ask you some questions, please?
2. Can you introduce yourself to us, please?
3. How often do you watch TV?
4. Who do you like to talk to when you feel upset, your dad or your mom?
5. How do you usually do in your spare time?
6. How do you like China? And why do you learn Chinese?
7. Which place of interest in China impresses you most? Why?
8. Do you plan to come to China again after you go back home?
【参考范文】
Recently we did a survey on what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. From the chart, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sports is the most popular activity in our school. The second most popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of them have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, show interest in reading. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.
In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the needs of the students. Besides, guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.
实例指导3—
诗歌评论
【写作任务】
下面有一首英文短诗，请根据这首诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。
标题为：My Teacher Mr. Li
There’s a teacher Mr Li,
Who is lovely and thirty-four.
Always encouraging us to try,
He leads us to world of “why”.
We all admire him more and more.
注意：
1. 不得照抄短诗原文。
2. 必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。
3. 必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。
4. 短文不能写成诗歌形式.
5. 词数：120左右。
【思路指导】
英语诗歌和汉语诗歌一样，语言精练、内涵丰富，颇受年轻人尤其是中学生所喜爱。事实上，英语诗歌也能表达悠远的意境、细腻的情感以及人间万象等。正因为如此，英语诗歌才能引起青年人的共鸣。而改写诗歌或诗歌评论，或用自己的语言将内容表达出来，也是一种创作的命题形式。
诗歌评论的写作难度明显高于普通书面表达，因为它要求考生首先必须读懂诗歌大意，进而运用准确的语言进行客观叙述。要写好诗歌评论，考生必须掌握一定的写作技巧。
【参考范文】
My Teacher Mr. Li
Of all my teachers, Mr. Li is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 34, he looks very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared With other teachers, Mr. Li pays more attention to his way
实例指导4――介绍报纸
假如你班同学自己创办了一份名为《我爱我班》的英文报纸,现在你在向其他班同学介绍你们的报纸。内容包括:
1. 办报目的:激发英语学习兴趣,提高英语知识运用能力,拓宽知识面；
2. 报纸基本情况介绍,如报纸的版面数、周期以及稿件来源等；
3. 主要栏目介绍,如:英语学习、校内资讯、班级公告、笑话故事等。
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词数:120左右。
分析:
1. 首先审清题目,根据题目所给的内容提示,不难看出本写作任务要求同学们写一篇说明文,即介绍一份班级报纸,包括办报目的、报纸基本情况以及主要栏目介绍。说明文要求对事物进行客观的描述,因此语言要简洁,说明过程要讲究层次和条理。
2. 其次要考虑作文的结构,在本写作任务中,文章的篇章结构很清晰,大致可分为三个部分:第一部分引出说明对象(一份班级英文报纸),可结合办报目的来对其进行概括性介绍；第二部分根据提示逐条展开具体介绍,这部分可做适当发挥,注意衔接性语句和连接词的运用；同时要注意详略得当,如可重点介绍自己最感兴趣的栏目。第三部分可用概括性句子来总结一下这份报纸给同学们带来的收获,这样既能做到首尾呼应,同时也可以确保文章的完整性。
初稿:
In order to stimulate our interest in studying English and put what we learn in practice, we have created our own English version newspaper I Love My Class. The paper can help us enrich our knowledge and help us learn English well. ????Our newspaper is published every two weeks and has four pages. Everyone can get it for free. The paper will cover many parts. It includes "English Study", "News Around Our School", "Class Bulletin", "Featured Story in Our Class" and "Jokes and Stories". All these parts are written or adapted by my classmates. ????The paper is close to our daily life and we can learn a lot from it.
1. 这篇习作结构比较完整,叙述了内容提示中的所有要点,语句通畅,条理清晰。
2. 文章存在的问题:
①初稿文章基本上是对所提示内容的翻译,在第二部分中对栏目进行描述时,建议做适当发挥,对个别栏目稍加详细介绍,这样会使文章看起来详略得当,内容充实；
②有些地方表述不是很清楚,句子意思上也欠妥当,如"Everyone can get it for free."中"everyone"指代不是很明确,容易引起误解。
③有些地方时态不一致,出现了一般现在时态(第二段中的"is published"、"includes"等)和将来时态(如第二段中的"will cover")的混用。由于本文介绍的是已经创办的报纸,在时态选择上宜采用一般现在时态和现在完成时态。
成稿:
In order to stimulate our interest in English learning and put what we learn into practice, our classmates have created an English newspaper named I Love My Class. I think it has helped widen our knowledge and improved our English significantly. ???? Our newspaper is published every two weeks and has four pages. We have designed various columns for our newspaper. If you want to get some information on how to improve your English skills, you can go and look through the "English Study" column; if you want to know what has happened in my class, you can go to check the "Class Bulletin". As for me, I like the "Jokes and Stories" section best. It can help reduce my pressure and make me smile often. ????By the way, all the stories and articles in the newspaper have been written or adapted by my classmates. We’ve had a lot of fun working and studying together.
Powerful sentences:
1. We can share our stories with other classmates.
2. The paper can help us learn more about the customs in English-speaking countries.
3. It also offers an opportunity for students to show their capabilities.
The movie Nanjing ! Nangjing has been publicly shown across the country. _____________
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你看过动画片《飞屋环游记》吗？请根据下表的内容介绍一下该动画片，并写出你对该片的评论。字数要求：100-120。
片名：《飞屋环游记》 （Up）
导演： 彼得道格特 （Peter Doctor）
上映时间：2010年6月29日，北美洲
The movie is popular worldwide because the story is touching and it shows the power of dreams. It proves to the audience that every one of us can realize our dreams if we keep on trying no matter how old we are.
In conclusion, Up is well worth seeing. It makes us reflect on our life and our dreams.
请以“Reading Newspapers Is A Good Habit” 为题写一篇80—100单词的短文。提示如下：
1．报纸是重要传媒。看报能获得国内外最新消息……
2．报纸能丰富我们的生活，上面有……
3．对我们学英语的人来说，看类似《中国日报》这样的英文报纸，……
One possible version
Reading Newspapers Is A Good Habit
Newspapers are important media. They can provide all kinds of latest news from both at home and abroad ,which can help us understand the world better.
Newspapers can also make our life rich .In newspapers , we can read stories about a variety of people ,find weather reports ,introductions to new books ,advertisements on traveling ,and so on .
As English learners ,reading newspapers in English ,such as “China Daily” ,is one of the best ways to improve our English. There are many words ,phrases and structures for us to learn ,and what’s more ,we can acquire abundant knowledge of history ,culture and society.
来自你市的中学生小记者最近进行了一次采访活动。请根据下面表格中的内容为你校的英语园地写一篇报道。
时间 2009年1月15日
地点 经济开发区
采访人 40名中学小记者
被采访人 开发区主任王庆海
采访内容 过去一年的成绩
如何吸引投资
三年后开发区的前景
其他 1．除了笔、本，还用了数码相机、录音笔等现代设备
2．对一流的设计、漂亮的绿化、现代的建筑留下了深刻的印象