第1讲
提纲类
提纲类作文分为提供全部写作要点和提供部分写作要点。提供全部写作要点的作文要求考生根据给定的内容,在增加适当的过渡词汇的基础上,写出一篇内容完整的短文。提供部分写作要点的作文是命题者给出了部分写作内容,同时又要求考生根据提示作一定程度的合理发挥,具有一定的开放性。
提纲类作文是高考常考题型,也是最为基本的考查考生写作能力的题型,学生写好这类作文是写好其他类型作文的基础。这类试题通常考查的是根据提示语写短文、书信、演讲、报道、介绍和说明人物或情况等,以检查考生是否掌握所学文体的基本格式。
具体写作时,同学们还应注意以下两个方面:
1. 有时提纲类作文所提供的要点顺序并非就是写作时的顺序,因此,写作前先将要点标出,并按照一定的逻辑关系,如时间顺序、空间顺序、事件发生的先后顺序等,把这些要点排列并整理好。
2. 提纲类作文不是简单地把汉语提示转换成英文,不能简单地直译。考生要用平时自己最有把握的单词、短语和句型,围绕主题,将意思完整清楚地表达出来。在遇到自己想不起来或找不着相应的英语词汇或句型时,学会用相近的句子来表达。
一、问题解决型
In recent days, we have to face a problem A,_which is becoming more and more serious. First说明A的现状. Second, 举例进一步说明现状.
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, 解决方法一. For another thing, 解决方法二. Finally, 解决方法三.
Personally, I believe that我的解决方法. I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because带来的好处.
二、积极有利型
Nowadays, 主题plays an important role in our life. For example,举例说明主题的现状.
Generally, its advantages can be listed as follows. First,好处一. Besides, 好处二.
Through the above analysis, my attitude toward this matter is positive, and the reasons are simple. It not only brings us 好处之一, but also gives us 好处之二 we have not expected.
Therefore, I can see its bright future from now on.
本文为应用文中的书信写作,属传统的指导性写作。写好此文,需注意以下几点:一是时态把握要准确。文章基本时态为一般现在时,同时兼顾其他的时态。二是要点要齐全,且详略得当。题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求,要点作出了明确的规定,这些要点不能有遗漏。写作重点可放在报纸优点的介绍上面。三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,使行文连贯流畅。
Dear EditorinChief,
Congratulations_on_the_5th_anniversary_of_Global_ Mirror!
I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua 【作文点评】
文章要点齐全,写作层次清楚,时态、语态正确,较好地完成了写作任务。作者能紧扣要点框架适当地增加细节,文中衔接词语,如first, equally, and, as a young student等的使用使文章前后连贯,承接自然。倒装句(Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people),非限定性定语从句(which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place)及虚拟语气(that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning)等复杂句式的使用也给文章增色不少。
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