2016届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选短文改错60

　　高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错

　　1.短文改错

　　文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

　　Dear peter,

　　I am very exciting to hear that you are coming to our school soon. Now let me to introduce our school to you. Our school is a famous school with long history. We have many experiencing teachers and excellent equipments. There are two teach buildings. One is for seniors and the other is for juniors. There is two lab buildings and a library. Except Chinese, maths, English, physics and chemistry, We have some electives(选修课).The students can choose what they like attend. We love our school. I am looking forward to meet you soon.

　　2.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Ken,

　　I’m very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I’m glad you had a

　　wonderfully time during the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the

　　countryside with some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace and

　　quite, which is what I can’t enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went

　　swimming every now and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim

　　together with friends in the cool, clean river on such hot days. In fact, I had never been

　　had a better holiday before. I took plenty photos there and I keep them where I can see

　　them every day as they always reminds me of my stay in the country。

　　Yours

　　Li Ping

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Jerry,I’m glad to receive your letter ask me what I’d like to be in the future. To be

　　honest, I had dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was nine. I hurt one of my legs one

　　day, that made me feel that I would not be able to walk any more. Unluckily, I was able

　　to leave my bed a month later thanks to a doctor. He was very friendly and carefully,

　　and gave me the courage I needed it to recover. Besides, while in hospital, I see many

　　sick people. Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who

　　are sick and in need my help. I believe my dream will be come true one day whether I

　　study hard now.

　　Yours

　　LuoWei

　　4.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”

　　5.短文改错

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat at restaurant. While waiting for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us. I remembered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didn’t have enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness meant so many to us.

　　6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Amy,

　　I glad to discuss your present situation with you. People often miss parents for the first time they left home. However, most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment. You cannot live with our parents forever. You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability. You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you. Maybe you will still miss your parents, and your new friends will bring joy to your new life. Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities. You will get much pleasure.

　　Faithfully yours

　　Sharon

　　试卷答案

　　1.

　　Dear peter,

　　I am very exciting to hear that you are

　　excited

　　coming to our school soon. Now let me to

　　去掉tointroduce our school to you. Our school is a

　　famous school with∧long history. We have many

　　a

　　experiencing teachers and excellent

　　experienced

　　equipments. There are two teach buildings. One is

　　equipment

　　teaching

　　for seniors and the other is for juniors. There is two

　　are

　　lab buildings and a library. Except Chinese, maths,

　　Besides

　　English, physics and chemistry, We have some

　　electives(选修课).The students can choose what

　　they like∧attend. We love our school. I am looking

　　to

　　forward to meet you soon.

　　meeting

　　2.1.exciting → excited

　　2. wonderfully → wonderful

　　3.take → took

　　4. friend →friends

　　5.river前加a

　　6.that →which

　　7.how →what

　　8.去掉been

　　9.plenty of

　　10. reminds →remind

　　3.1. ask → asking

　　2.had →have

　　3.that → which

　　4. Unluckily → Luckily

　　5. carefully → careful

　　6.去掉it

　　7.see → saw

　　8.in need of

　　9.去掉be

　　10. whether →if

　　4.

　　My friend Dick was seven years old, and her (his) sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take (took) them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city ∧ (加to ) buy some new clothes. They played for a (an) hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely (nice) cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece (pieces) to your sister. But remembering (remember) to do it like a gentleman.” “How do gentlemen do it？” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person,” answered his aunt. Dick thought up (about) this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but (and) said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.”

　　5.

　　After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat

　　I

　　at ∧ restaurant. While waiting for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets

　　a

　　change

　　on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been

　　read

　　paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been

　　wonderful

　　happened to us. I remembered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didn’t have

　　must

　　enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness

　　for

　　but

　　meant so many to us.

　　much

　　6.1.在glad前加am

　　在parents前加their

　　left--leave

　　4.educations--education

　　5.our--your

　　6.person--personal

　　7.whomever--whoever

　　8.and--but

　　9.will--should

　　10.the--an