第15讲 短文改错2012新题赏析
新题赏析
全国新课标
题一：
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
题二：
Dear Mom,
Mother’s Day was coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you.
Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!
Your little girl,
Jennifer
全国I卷uch after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of
77._________
the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I
78._________
was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories
79._________
till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant
80._________
view there. You told me the name of different plants and their
81._________
characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology
82._________
and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now
83.________
my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study
84.________
and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since
85.________
we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then.
Yours,
Daisy
题四：
An English lady was finally decided that she really should
66_______
learn to drive, And after many attempts, she past her
67_______
driving test and told her husband that. To release，he
68_______
was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But
69_______
then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that
70_______
they wouldn’t take the holiday. “How did you change your
71_______
mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because
72_______
of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have
73______
been practicing for three weeks now, but I still couldn’t
74______
get used to it-in fact, I’ve nearly killed three peoples。”
75______
全国II卷It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first
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____
prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do
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was to write a story or present it. My teachers
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have been telling me how great my writing was.
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So if they had said was true, I would have a chance
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of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful
81.
help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living
82.
near my house , who was a very much famous writer
83
He agreed to reading my story and give me some
84
advices on how to write like a real writer.
85
题六：
Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76.
At that time, we often spend time together. 77.
Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78.
study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79.
other words, we would be separated for long time. 80.
Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81.
my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82.
gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83.
kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84.
look forward to see her again in the near future. 85.
第15讲 短文改错2012新题赏析
主讲教师：林斌
北京八十中学英语高级教师
新题赏析
全国新课标
题一：
1. visit-visited
2. but-and/so
3 to
4. comfortably改为comfortable
5. were改为was
6. for改为with
7. taking改为taken
8. dish改为dishes
9. such后加a
10. me改为mine
解析：
1.根据时间状语last month可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。
2. 前后文是顺延或者因果关系，所以连词用so或者and。
3. anywhere是指地点的副词，前面不用介词。
4. 修饰后面的名词room，要用形容词。
5. what引导的主语从句作主语，谓语动词根据后面的表语决定，此处后面是单数，所以用was。
6. 动词share常与with构成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。
7. 非谓语动词做后置定语，被修饰的词和take之间构成被动关系，所以要用过去分词。
8. 由several修饰，后面名词要用复数。
9. hotel是可数名词，前面要加a。
10. 双重所有格的构成是of+名词性物主代词或者所有格。
题二：
1. was改为is
2. your改为you
3. thank改为thanks
4. on
5. by改为for
6. teach改为teaching
7. had改为have
8. may后加not
9. Whenever改为Wherever
10. Hope改为Wish
解析：
1. 指的是现在马上就要到母亲节了。
2. 此处动词send接双宾语，应使用宾格形式，构成短语send sb. sth.。
3.“表达感谢”应为：express one’s thanks。
4. 在副词today之前不用介词，故去掉。
5. Thank sb. for…为固定短语“因…而感谢”。
6. 此处是but连接的用于介词之后的并列的动名词形式。
7. 全篇文章属于现在的时态，故将过去完成时改为现在完成时。
8. 句意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。
9. 根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。
10. 动词hope后不能接双宾语，应用wish符合语境和语法规则。
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题三：
76. those改为these
77. after改为since
78. happily改为happy
79. child前加a
80. fall改为fell
81. name改为names
82. interesting改为interested
83.
into
84. are改为is
85. use改为used
解析：
76. these days意为近来。
77. since意为自从……以来，主句中用现在完成时。
78. feel意为感觉，是系动词，后面要跟形容词做表语。
79. child是单数可数名词，前面要加a。
80.指的是过去，所以要用过去式fell。
81. 后面指的是不同的植物，所以name要用复数形式。
82. 主语是人，对……感兴趣要用be interested in。
83. enter本身就是及物动词，后面不需要加介词。
84. together with连接两个主语的时候，后面的谓语动词要和前面的保持一致，此处要和Ann保持一致，所以要用单数谓语动词is。
85. 此处是被动语态，表示被用来，所以用be used。
题四：
66.去掉finally 前的was
67. past→passed
68. he→she
69. √
70. after→before
71 How→Why
72. by→in
73. right→the right
74. couldn’t→can’t
75. peoples→people
解析：
66. lady与decide 之间为主动关系。
67. 此处意为“通过”，应使用pass的过去式。
68. 此处应为妻子要带丈夫去法国，应用女性的人称代词。
69. √
70.
此处应为在此次旅行之间，妻子就因不适应右侧驾驶改变了主意。
71
此处为丈夫对妻子突然改变主意不理解，而询问原因。
72.
in surprise 为固定搭配，意为“惊奇地，惊讶地”。
73.
方位名词前腰加定冠词。
74.
此处应为目前还不是要右侧驾驶，应用现在时。
75.
people本身就是复数名词，不需要在后面加s。
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题五：
76. √
77. on改为in
78. or改为and
79. have改为had
80. if后加what
81. were 改为was
82. gentleman前加a
83. much
84. reading改为read
85. advices改为advice
解析：
76. √
77. in…show “在……节目里”。
78. or表选择，and表顺接和并列。
79. 此处应该指的是获奖之前，获奖是过去，所以此处要用过去的过去，即过去完成时。
80. what引导主语从句，在句中意思为“……的话”。
81. 不可数名词谓语动词用单数。
82. gentleman是可数名词。
83.“非常出名”，very修饰形容词，very much修饰动词。
84. agree to do sth.“同意做某事”，to后跟动词原形。
85. advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
题六：
76. friend → friends
77. spend →spent
78. Thank →Thanks
79. √
80. for a long
81. off
82. him →her
83. has →had
84. kept后加in
85. see →seeing
解析：
76. one of 后接名词复数，表示许多的当中的一个。
77. At that time“那时候”所以此处表示过去发生的事情。
78. Thanks to 是固定短语，“多亏了，因为”。
79. √
80. For a long time表示“一段时间”，固定短语。
81. leave 已经表示离开之意，off多余。
82. 代词使用要一致，根据上下文可知是女她。
83. 时态错误，主句中said是过去，所以从句中要用相应的过去，所以应为过去完成时。
84. 固定短语keep in touch with表示“与人保持联系”。
85. look forward to中的to是介词，后接动词时要用动名词形式。