训练（01）及参考范文
情景作文（20分）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。
注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
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This morning
【参考范文】
第一节：基础写作
假如你叫李华，是惠州的一名中学生。最近，当地政府正在实施快速公交和桥梁建设，结果引起人们的广泛争议。请你根据人们不同的观点，给当地报社写一封信，反映这一情况。
赞成观点 反对观点
1．能够解决交通问题，方便人民生活；
2．有助于发展经济，提高人民生活水平；
3．有助于提高惠州作为现代化旅游城市的形象。 1．会造成环境污染；
2．会产生噪音，打扰居民平静的生活；
3．时常造成交通堵塞。
[写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的学校和学生姓名。
3．短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入5个句子中。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
参考词汇：快速公交系统BRT
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Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
第二节：读写任务
阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".
As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.
Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.
One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.
She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn't need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词就“父母的过分关爱”进行议论，内容包括；
（1）请举一个你或你周围的周学得到父母的过分关爱的事例；
（2）谈谈你对此事的看法。
【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
1、Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is taking place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.
Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city in the northeast of Guangdong province.
But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.
2、Editor,
I'm writing to talk about the construction project which is going on in our city.
Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people. Some agree that we should carry out this construction project because they can not only solve some traffic problems which is becoming worse and worse, but also help to make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, they think that it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Huizhou as a modern tourist city.
But others are against it, saying that they the project may cause air pollution. They also believe the noise produced by the project will disturb people's peaceful life. Personally, I think the construction project will certainly do a lot of good to the city and the people. If we focus our attention on the environment, all of us will lead a better life in the future.
第二节：读写任务：
The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.
What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".
As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother's phone call, telling her a white lie that I'm already at home.
The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.