训练（11）及参考范文
开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
基本分析：
1. 三分之一描写要点：阳光，楼(很靠近)，弯曲的树。（the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）
2. 三分之二议论着眼立意：
—— 1.人生角度：在成长的道路上（树的成长），有曲折，有困难，（建筑的阻挡，弯曲）但是只要向着光明和希望（太阳）去努力拼搏，坚持不懈，还是能够冲破桎梏取得成功（树在楼的夹缝中长高了，超出建筑）。
—— 2.和谐角度： 城市的发展（建筑）和环境的可持续发展（树的成长）要协调，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在阳光下）
3. 立意与现实生活关系：1. 引导90后要具有积极的生活态度，生活非一帆风顺的。2. 扣住低碳生活的环保热点，城市和环境的和谐发展也是低碳生活的必需。
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预测五：
近年微博（microblog）在中国越来越流行，2011年也被有关媒体称为“微博元年”。假设你是校报记者，请根据下列提示为校报写一篇介绍微博的英语短文。1.非常方便，人们可以随时利用微博来表达心声，交流想法；2.给人们提供了一种释放压力的方式；3.与朋友分享心情，增进他们之间的了解；4.也有潜在的危险，有可能泄露个人隐私或其他重要信息；5.综上所述，使用微博要谨慎。词数：100左右（已给部分不计入总词数）Microblog has become part of our life.
【参考范文】Microblog has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on the microblog, their friends may also know about their condition and can offer timely comfort. However, microblog can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information. All in all, microblog provides us with some concerns as well as comfort and large quantities of information, so we should be careful while using it.
预测六：
为开展“敬老”活动，你校特意邀请了梁会兰女士来做报告。梁会兰女士是北京下岗工人，16年来，她义务照顾十几位孤寡老人和残疾老人的生活起居。请你据此以校学生会的名义写一个通知，要点如下：1.报告的目的；2.报告人介绍；3.报告时间和地点：2011年12月26日下午4:00~6:00,学校报告厅；4.参加人员：全体学生。注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.通知的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Notice
Fellow students,
December 14,2011
Students’ Union
【参考范文】
Notice
Fellow students,In order to call on everybody to respect the elderly,our school will invite Ms Liang Huilan to give us a report.Liang Huilan,a laid off worker in Beijing,has been voluntarily taking good care of more than ten elderly people who live alone or have disabilities over the past 16 years,for which she has won great respect from people around her and has been awarded various honors by the government.The report will be given in the lecture hall of our school on the afternoon of December 26,and it will last two hours(from 4:00 p.m.to 6:00 p.m.).All the students are required to attend it.Don’t be late.
December 14,2011
Students’ Union