第三部分
高考作文优秀范文及针对训练（配范文）
应用文写作
一、书信
重点诠释
英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同，它包括五部分，即：信头，称呼，正文，结束语和签名，具体如下：
精典题例解读
下面是2003年NMET的书面表达试题。体裁为书信，内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少，但无法照译。
考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点：
1.认真审读所给文字和草图，确认全部信息要点。
2.确定写的动机：向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。
3.确定写的基本路子：以回信的口气，介绍情况，询问态度。
4.确定语篇的结构：书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。
5.起草语篇，考虑措辞。
6.进行文字修改。
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1.词数：100左右。
2.参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。
Dear Bob,
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_______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
内容要点：
1.开头;
2.公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）;
3.面积、家具（25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子）;
4.公寓位置（芳草街，离学校一站远）;
5.月租500元;
6.结尾。
说明：
1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。
Dear Bob,
I'm so glad to learn that you're coming in September. I've found a place for you,
It's a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuanper month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact. it's only one stop.
Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
1．假如你是贫困地区的一名失学的儿童，名叫李萍。你很幸运地得到在北京工作的一位美国人Mr.Smith的帮助，得以重新回到校园继续学习。于是你于2002年2月1日给Mr.Smith写一封信，向他表示感谢，并介绍了学习情况。（字数：80~120）
信中内容包括：
1.收到书和钱，并能重返校园，表示感谢；
2.在老师的帮助下学习上取得了很大进步；
3.老师表扬了你，家长鼓励你；
4.下决心更加努力学习，取得更大进步；
5.盼望见到Mr.Smith，但因没有机会去北京，希望Mr.Smith给你寄张照片。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith.
I'm glad to have received your money and books. Now, I can go to school again. I'm very happy. Thank you very much!
I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts. I have made great progress in my study. Our teachers have praised me for it. And my parents have encouraged me to work harder. I have made up my mind to do so and make even greater progress with the help of the teachers.
I'm looking forward to seeing you, but I have no chance to go to Beijing. Could you send me one of your photos to me? Thank you!
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
2．假定你是李华，有一位美国朋友Smith托你在北京找工作，你看到21世纪英文报（21st Century）上刊登了一则招聘启事，认为他很合适。请用英文写一封短信，用E-mail发给Smith，告知此事，并征求他的意见。广告原文如下：
Foreign Teachers Wanted!
The Education Department of the Ladder Company is running an English course for children and adults.
Requirements:
Foreign Teachers Wanted!
The Education Department of the Ladder Company is running an English course for children and adults.
Requirements:
1.Native English speaker
2.University degree in education or related field preferred
3.Foreign expert certification
If you are interested, please call us:
Tel:86-10-68019433
E-mail:liecbj@hotmail.com
注意：1.开头语已给你写好；
2.介绍必须包括所有内容，但不要逐词翻译说明部分；
3.词数：100个单词左右。
Dear Smith,
I know you want to find a job in Beijing.
【参考范文】
Dear Smith,
I know you want to find a job in Beijing. I read an advertisement in today's ?1st Century?an English paper here. A Beijing Ladder Information Company is running a school for children and adults. So they need native speaker English teachers. What they prefer is a university degree in education or other related field, which you h一封ave. And a foreign expert certification is also required. I think you are the right person they want.
If you are interested, please directly call or write to the company. The telephone number is 86-10-68019433,and their e-mail address is :liecbj@hotmail.com.
Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．光明中学依山傍水，校园曾经安静美丽，一年前该校附近建了一家化工厂。学校受到了严重影响。假如你是该校的一名学生，名叫李东。请你根据下表内容用英文给中国日报写一封信，反映情况，呼吁有关部门采取相应措施。
建厂前 建厂后
校园内鲜花盛开,树木常青;校园安静,学习佳地 工厂每天排出大量污水、废气，严重影响师生健康，花草树木受到危害，工厂噪音也干扰了教学活动。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.开头已为你写好。
Dear editor,
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School,Our school used to…
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I'm a student of Guang Ming Middle School.Our school used tobe very beautiful.There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school all the year round. It used to be a quiet place and it was a good place for study.
Things have changed since a chemical works was built near our school a year ago. Every day it produces large quantities of waste water and harmful gases. The terrible pollution has done great harm to us as well as to the trees and flowers. And the great noise from the works has greatly affected our teaching and studying activities. Our school is no longer a quiet and good place for study. We suffer a lot from the pollution.
We do hope you can help us to take measures to protect our school and stop it from being polluted.
Yours truly,
Li Dong
4．下面是某中外合资企业刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一则广告：
Office secretary, with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations, operating PC(personal computer).Address, age, health condition
Write to A518,Charlie Office.
假如你是张林，现年20岁，身体健康，学习英语6年，学过广告中所列项目。通信地址是滨海市745信箱（P.O.Box745）。请根据广告中提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要情况，写一封自荐信。字数：100词左右。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
I have read your advertisement in yesterday's China Daily. I feel I am qualified for the job in your company. I'm 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school, I studied English for six years. I also learned bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I'm good at operating PC and have a good command of English. I'm interested in the position of a secretary. I want very much to be accepted by your company. I'll work hard if I can be a member in your company.
Zhang Ling
5．假设你是王晓明，请根据你校美化校园的规划，用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封短信，介绍该规划。短信的主要内容如下：
规划目的 美化校园、净化空气
创造良好学习和生活环境
规划内容 种植花草树木
建一个植物园，供参观、实践
建一个小花园，供休息、读书
建几座名人雕塑，激励师生
注意：1．短信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：雕塑—statue (n.) 植物园—botanical garden (n.)
Dear Peter,
I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.
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Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours,
One possible version
Dear Peter ,
I'd like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.
The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher ,and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in .
According to the program ,we will plant different kinds of trees ,flowers and grass in and around our school .A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in .Besides ,we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest .What's more ,some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder .Don't you think it a wonderful program?
Welcome to our school if you have any chance.
Yours ,
6．假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。
自然情况 ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成就
②经济发展迅速
③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。
存在问题 ④水、空气污染
⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法 ⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)
注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2．词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
参考词汇：经济economy n．
Dear Bob，
It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．
Yours，
Xiaohua
Dear Bob，
It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Xiaohua
7.请你仔细阅读所给英文信，然后给Worried写一封回信。要求包含以下内容：
1.安慰鼓励；
2.记一些惯用词组和句型结构，将它们组织在一起并用其造句；
3.多读英语，告诉他通过大量阅读才能正确使用语言；
4.多背诵一些好的短文。
要求：不要逐字逐条翻译，词数100左右。
Dear Helpful,
I'm a Senior Three student and I'm in trouble.I used to like English,but now I have some difficulty in English,especially in English writing.Though I know English is a very important subject,I think now it is too difficult for me.You know I have got poor results in English many times because my writing is poor.I wonder why so many students like English and can get good results in English.I do want to be one of the best students and go to a famous university after graduation.But my English is not good enough.What should I do?
Worried
【参考范文】
Dear Worried,
I have received your letter and I'm glad to give you some suggestions.First of all,don't be disappointed.Many students find it difficult to write well.In my opinion,if you want to improve your writing,you can do several things.First,do some study with set phrases and sentence structures.Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them.Second,read as much as possible.There are many things that can't be learnt.You must see them in books many times.Then you'll be able to use them correctly yourself. So in order to write well,you must learn to read much.Finally,you'd better recite some good passages.
Good luck to you in your writing.
Helpful
7.假设你是李华，你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点：*表示歉意
*理由：去机场接人
*询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座
注意：1. 词数：100左右
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Miss Morgan,
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very much interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
8．你是李华。当闻知某合资宾馆招收10名女服务员后，便写信与饭店外方经理联系求职。求职信应包括下表中所列全部内容。
姓名 李华 性别 女 年龄 20 文化程度 高中毕业
住址 深圳市深南路48号 婚否 未婚 健康状况 良好
个
人
简
历 6～12岁 在第一小学学习
12～18岁 在深圳中学上学
18～20岁 在建筑工地干活
20岁至今 在邮政局当邮递员
爱好及
特长 上学期间学习了六年英语，中学毕业后一直不间断学习英语，现在英语口语和打字都很熟练。
喜欢唱歌和跳舞。2004年曾获深圳市业余歌手比赛一等奖。
Dear Mr Margaret,
I'm glad to know that ten waitresses are needed in your hotel. I'd like to be one of them. I'm a Chinese girl of twenty. I'm single and healthy. I started school when I was six. I studied in No. 1 Primary School. At the age of eleven, I went Shenzhen Middle school for learning. After graduation in 2003 I began to work on a constructions site as an ordinary worker, I became a postwoman when I was twenty.
I had learned English for 6 years at school, and have kept on learning it since I left school. Now I can speak good English and type well. I enjoy singing and dancing. Last year I won the first prize in the competition for the spare time singers in the city.
Could you let me have a position in your hotel？
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully, Li Hua
9．假如你是王林，李明是你的好友，他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣，打算到该公司谋职（apply for a position。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为他写一封推荐信。
词数110左右。
姓名 李明 性别 男 国籍 中国
出生地 江苏，启东 婚否 已婚 出生日期 1980.8.21
通讯地址 启东市人民路148号 电话 0513-83335550
职业 律师 学历 大学毕业
外语水平 擅长英语，懂一些日语、德语
其他 有三年工作经历，办事认真，待人诚恳，与人和睦相处
Dear Mr. Brown,
I'd like to introduce my friend to you, Mr. Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position with your firm. He graduated from college three years ago and since then he has worked as a lawyer. He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German. He works hard and is careful in everything he does. He is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Qidong, Jiangsu Province, China. He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Qidong city. His telephone number is 0513-83335550. He shows great interest in your firm. If he is accepted, he will do his best. I'm sure he will be fit for the position. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Wang Lin
10．假定你是李明，去年时期曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访向，住在Peter家。今年寒假Peter要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给Peter发个电邮件。
内容
到京 到机场接机，举办欢迎家宴
活动 参观长城等名胜古迹
到场欣赏中国民乐新年音乐会
游览繁华市区、购物
希望 如行程允许，在北京过春节
注意：1．词数不少于60；2．对紧扣主题的发挥不予扣分；3．开头与结尾已为你写好。
January 26th , 2007
Hi ! It's Li Ming here .
Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing , China .
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I believe we will have much fun together .
WELL , SEE YA SOON. BYE ! LLi Ming
内容要点：1．接机、家宴；2．游览长城、市区及购物；3．欣赏新年音乐会；4．希望共渡春节
January 26th, 2007
Hi! It's Li Ming here again.
Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing in a couple of days. My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we are so glad you can stay with us while you are in Beijing. We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home.
On the day you arrive, my father and I will meet you at the airport and in the evening we will have a nice dinner party at home, I'm sure you will like all the delicious Chinese food.
During the following days, I will show you around many places of interest in Beijing, including the Great Wall, which is regarded as one of the Seven Wonders of the World. We will spend some time touring around downtown Beijing, such as Wangfujing, Xidan and Qianmen, where you can do some shopping if you like. Of course, as it is the largest one in the world, Tian' anmen Square is a scenic spot we can't miss. Another exciting moment we will share is going to the 2007 New Year Concert given by China National Traditional Orchestra, which is held at famous Vienna Golden Hall, Austria during the Chinese Spring Festival every year.
The spring festival, like the carnivals in western countries, is a special joyous/joyful occasion of celebration for Chinese as well as other many Asians. If you can stay in Beijing long enough, you will be able to share the pleasure of it with us.
I believe we will have much fun together. WELL, SEE YA SON, BYR! Li Ming
11．假设你是李华，明年即将进入大学学习，但是不知怎样适应大学的生活。请你就以下大学新生常遇到的情况给北京大学校长写一封信，寻求建议。
（1）在生活中不会照料自己；（2）感到孤独、经常想家；（3）钱物容易丢失；（4）食物、气候不适应；（5）校外租房现象。
注意：1.短信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右。
Dear President,
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Yours,
Dear President,
Next year I will go to study at university, but I don't know how to adapt myself to university life. I hear many freshmen are at a loss what to do when they are at university. They can't take care of themselves in their everyday life, feeling lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phones are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and food, they often feel sick. Some even rent rooms outside the campus. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future?
Yours,
Li Hua
12．日前，针对学生的零用钱（pocket money）的消费方向，你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查．得出数据如下表。现请你用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，反映这一情况，并呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。
注意：1．书信中不必一一列举具体数字，只要抓住主要问题和数据说明问题即可。
2．字数：120~150字。开头已给出．不计人总词数。
Dear editor．
Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money．
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Dear editor, Recently a survey has been done to find out how middle school students spend their pocket money. In this survey, both junior students and senior students spend most their money on books, sacks and playing games, still some money goes to clothes, banks, sports, and so on. The survey shows that about 44％of seniors prefer books to sacks （37%）and playing games （31%）.On the other hand, only 32％of juniors will spend their pocket money buying books, while over a half buy sacks and 44％spend on playing games. Both seniors and juniors would not waste too much money in clothes or put it in banks.
I think too much sacks will not only makes us put on weight but also does herm to our health. In addition. if we play games without limit, we'll lose much precious time, which results in low grades. Furthermore, the money is hard-earned. I hope we students value our money as well as our time.
13．假如你叫李华，是长沙市某中学学生。最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征询住宿家庭，你有意申请。请根据下表提供的信息用英语给校长写封信，说明你的理由。
申请理由：
住房条件 宽敞、整洁、环境优美
语言优势 擅长英语，父母是英语教授，不会有交流困难
接待经验 上个月刚刚接待过两名美国学生
参观游览 父亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜
其他 ……（内容由考生自己添加）
注意：
1．文章必须包括所有要点。
2．词数：100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students.
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Dear sir,
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families of the British students.
We have a large and clean house, which lies in a beautiful area of the city. I'm good at English and my parents are both professors of English, so I'm sure we won't have any difficulty communicating with English speakers. My father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car. Last month we received two American students. We had a great time. Besides, my mother cooks well, so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food. I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to make friends with them.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua