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专题九 书面表达
一.(成都2011届高三三诊)
随着网络的普及和上网人数的增加，各种网络语言应运而生，人们对日常交流中网络语言的使用也是见解各异。现在，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，简述人们对使用网络语言的态度及理由，并结合自身实际或身边同学情况谈谈你的观点。
消极态度及理由；
积极态度及理由；
你的观点。
注意： 1.词数100左右。书面表达的标题已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.参考词汇：普及popularity（n.）。
Is the Cyber Language Good or Bad?
【思路点拨】
此材料要求写一篇话题作文（议论文），首先文章包括三个自然段来写：第一自然段总的介绍背景随着网络的普及和上网人数的增加，各种网络语言应运而生，人们对日常交流中网络语言的使用也是见解各异；第二自然段分别简明扼要地阐述人们对使用网络语言的消极和积极两方面的态度及理由；第三自然段表述你对此的态度和看法。
【审题要点】
人称：第三人称和第一人称。
时态：现在完成时和一般现在时。
文体：议论文
【参考例文】
这篇文章格式正确，观点鲜明，层次分明，采用了对比论证的方法。表达方式多样，如Meanwhile，While， As for me，等词语，使文章结构紧凑，上下文连贯，详略得当。尤其是复合句的恰当使用，使文章言简意赅。
【佳句点评】
1. With the popularity of the Internet and the growing number of people surfing the Internet, …（为伴随状语从句）
2.different opinions about using cyber languages…（划线部分动名词短语作different opinions的后置定语）
3.They think that using the cyber language has a bad effect on our using Chinese correctly,…（①划线部分动名词短语作that的同位语，that和它的同位语在think后引导的宾语从句中作主语。②Havehas a goodbad effect 固定搭配“对……有……的影响”）
4.As for me（“就我而言”，发表个人观点时的常用语）
二. （浙江省宁波市2011届高三高考模拟卷）前不久的日本大地震不但导致核电厂爆炸，而且还在中国掀起了一场人们抢购食盐的浪潮。请你针对人们抢购食盐这一现象，用英语按以下要求为你们校报写一篇100-120个词的短文。标题自拟，不计词数。
1、描述以上有关地震和人们抢购食盐的情况；
2、分析抢购的原因（如听信谣言、缺乏常识、……）；
3、简短表述你对这一事件的看法。
参考词汇：iodized salt碘盐；panic buying抢购；rumor谣言________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【思路点拨】
此材料要求写一篇夹叙夹议的话题作文，文章可分三个自然段来写：第一自然段写原因由日本的地震引发的核辐射而引起人们纷纷抢盐；第二自然段从两个方面分析原因①听信谣言见盲目跟风②缺乏常识；第三自然段陈述你个人的观点。
【审题要点】
人称：第三人称和第一人称。
时态:一般过去时和一般现在时。
文体：记叙文和议论文。
【参考范文】[115 words]
No Need for Panic Buying
Not long ago, a major earthquake hit Japan, which not only led to the explosion in a nuclear power plant, but also a wave of buying salt in China.
Why did people rush to buy salt? One reason is that many people believed rumors that iodized salt could prevent the hurt of radiation. As a result, they rushed to buy salt. Other people worried about an increase of price so they followed. Another reason is the lack of
common sense among the public. As we know, it is not helpful enough to guard against
radiation even by taking larger amounts of salt than usual.
So in my opinion, panic buying of salt is absolutely unnecessary.
【亮点回放】
这篇文章格式正确，观点鲜明，条理清晰，文章中not only…but also…/One reason is that… Another reason is…的正确使用使文章显得更连贯、紧凑。第二段首句用疑问句形式避免平铺直叙，更能引人思考。最后一句话陈述个人观点简洁有力。
【佳句点评】
1.which not only led to the explosion in a nuclear power plant, but also a wave of buying salt in China.（①由which 引导的非限制性定语从句，which代指前面整句话a major earthquake hit Japan②not only…but also…不但……而且……固定搭配）。
2. One reason is that many people believed rumors that iodized salt could prevent the hurt of radiation.（第一个that及后面部分作is的表语从句，第二个that及后面部分作rumors的同位语从句‘解释说明是什么谣言’）。
3. As a result（结果）。
4. As we know（据我们所了解）。
三.开放作文请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your English class, the teacher shows the picture below and asks the class to discuss it．Your classmates may have different understandings．
Look at the picture carefully and tell the class how YOU understand it．In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful, because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time.
The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict. Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Thus things will turn into a “win-win” situation.
Therefore, remember that sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. Cooperation will benefit everyone.
【亮点回放】
这篇文章格式正确，观点鲜明，用讲事实，摆道理的方法告诉我们合作优于对抗的道理。文中虚拟语气的使用，使道理讲得更透彻、明白。
【佳句点评】
1.because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. （too…to太……而不能……）
2. The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict.（is better than比较级：……优于……）
3. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first…（与将来事实相反的虚拟语气）
4. Thus things will turn into a “win-win” situation.（实现“双赢”）
四.（吉林省长春实验中学2011届高三下学期期中考试） 自哥本哈根气候大会以来，“实行低碳经济”，“过低碳生活”已成为人们关注的热门话题。最近你班就这个话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给21st Century 写篇文章，报道你们班的讨论情况。为什么要“实行低碳经济” 温室气体大量排放，污染严重，环境恶化
如何走“绿色发展道路” 1．植树造林
2．开发清洁能源和再生性能源
3．回收和利用废弃物
过低碳生活如何“从我做起” （联系自己拟定内容，至少列举两点）
注意：
1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．文章中不得提及考生所在班级及本人姓名。
Since the Copenhagen Climate Conference, carrying out low carbon common & living a low carbon life has been a hot topic. Recently “实行低碳经济”温室气体大量排放，污染严重，环境恶化“绿色发展道路”过低碳生活如何“从我做起”
【亮点回放】
这篇文章格式正确，观点鲜明，层次清晰，表达方式多样，文中First, Second, Third, 等词语，使文章结构紧凑，上下文连贯。特别最后两段的几个排比的祈使句，使文章结构显得很整齐。
【佳句点评】
1. my classmates put forward the following suggestions about how to take a green development path.（①put forward固定短语“提出” ②how+不定式，构成了介词about的宾语从句）
2. We should use public transportation as much as possible.（as… as…尽可能多的）
五. （唐山一中2011届高三仿真试题一）假如你是一个乘客，名字是李华，你对你乘坐的某次航班不满意，理由有四个：
航空公司弄丢了你的一个包，包内有秘密文件；
飞机晚点一个半小时；
飞机上的食物很差；
空姐的服务态度也不好。
请就此事给公司经理写一封投诉信，词数100词左右。首句已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:空姐: stewardess
Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I am a passenger of your airline.________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
这是一篇关于投诉信的应用文。文章可分三个自然段来写:第一段指出写这封信的原因；第二段具体陈述投诉的四条原因；第三段提出你的建议。
【审题要点】
人称:第一人称。
时态: 一般现在时和一般过去时。
文体：投诉信（应用文）。
【参考范文】
Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I am a passenger of your airline. I’m writing this letter about your bad service. I’m sorry to say that I’m very unhappy about your airline.
Firs of all, your airline lost one of my bags in which there is a secret paper. Secondly, my plane was one and a half hours late. As a result, I was late for an important meeting. Thirdly, the food on the plane was terrible. Fourthly, the stewardesses at the airline were unfriendly and impolite to me. Honestly speaking, this is the worst airline I know in the world.
I do hope you can help me find my bag and improve your service.
Yours
Li Hua
【亮点回放】
这篇投诉信格式正确，观点鲜明，原因陈述很有条理，建议很明确。文中Firs of all, Secondly, Thirdly, Fourthly, 等词使文章结构紧凑，上下文连贯，详略得当。
【佳句点评】
1. I’m sorry to say that I’m very unhappy about your airline.（这种表达是非常婉转的说法，显得非常有礼貌）
2. Honestly speaking, this is the worst airline I know in the world.（很坦诚地说）
3. I do hope you can help me find my bag and improve your service.（助动词do 在这起强调作用，用来加强语气。）
六.（南京市2011届高三二模） 请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：
1. 描述这幅漫画的内容。
2. 是否同意他们的教育方式，并陈述理由。
3. 对家庭教育提出建议。注意：1. 词数：150左右。
2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
参考词汇： 溺爱 spoil v.
As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. ____
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【思路点拨】
这是一篇看图作文。先观察图的内容，再就这种现象发表看法，最后提出建议。文章分三个自然段来写:第一段描述图画的内容父亲用尺子严格要求孩子，而母亲则用巧克力溺爱孩子；第二段再就这种现象发表你的看法并陈述理由；第三段提出你的建议。
【审题要点】
人称：第一人称。
时态：一般现在时。
文体：记叙文和议论文。
【参考范文】
individual personalities. Since praise and criticism both play vital roles in children’s education, it is essential that parents should try to maintain the balance between love and strictness. Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development. (157 words )
【亮点回放】
这篇文章句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯 What is illustrated in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him.（划线部分为主语从句What在主语从句中作主语，that及后面部分为表语从句）
2. They adopt strikingly inconsistent methods, which makes their child confused. （此句为非限制性定语从句，which代指前面整句话）
3. If we always love children too much, they will turn out to be self-centered and dependent, tending to do whatever they want to. （①self-centered自我为中心的，②whatever they want to作do的宾语从句。）
4. So far as I am concerned, it is better to use appropriate methods based on children’s individual personalities. （①So far as I am concerned据我所知道的，②it is better to do something做…….较好，这是一种较委婉的说法。）
七.情景作文
假如你校最近就家长应该如何对待孩子的问题进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果，并针对图表2的其中一个数据所反映的情况写出你的看法。注意：1. 文章的开头已经给出。
2. 词数不少于60。生词: 图表 chart（请将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）
Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】
这是一篇看图作文。文章可分四个自然段来写：第一段总述最近我们学校制作了一个关于父母如何对待孩子的调查表格；第二段描述第一个表格的具体内容（在描述表格内容时，如果不能直译，就换一种说法）；第三段描述第二个表格的具体内容；第四段发表你个人的看法。
【审题要点】
人称:第三人称。
时态：一般现在时。
文体：记叙文和议论文。
【参考范文】
Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents treat their children.
According to Chart 1, three behaviors from parents are considered most welcome among the students. 33.5% of the students feel happy in that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. What’s more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.
As is shown in Chart 2, 32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. While all parents love their children and want the best for them, with too much pressure, however, some children will feel they have failed if they are not accepted at a top school or university.
I think parents should have practical expectations for their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.
【亮点回放】
这篇文章信息内容完整While， however, What’s more,等词使文章结构紧凑，上下文连贯，详略得当。特别是复合句的使用，使文章言简意赅。
【佳句点评】
1. According to Chart 1（根据表格1）
2. 33.5% of the students feel happy in that their parents trust them, laying a basic foundation for family communication.（ in that their parents trust them作原因状语从句，laying a basic foundation作伴随状语从句）
3. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other.（when they are talking with each other.作时间状语从句）
4. As is shown in Chart 2（如表格2所显示）
八. 随着人们生活水平的提高，私家车的数量逐年增加，但随之而来的塞车问题日益严重。假设你是学校学生会主席，请你写一封英文倡议书，呼吁同学们尽量骑自行车出行，内容如下：
[写作内容]
1. 现象：由于家长接送造成学校周边交通阻塞的问题非常严重。
2. 建议：选择环保的出行方式——骑自行车。
3. 理由：a. 减轻交通压力；b. 减少噪音和空气污染；c. 锻炼身体。
4. 呼吁：改善交通，从我做起。
[写作要求]
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 不要逐句翻译，可适当添加细节使文章内容完整连贯。
：改善交通，从我做起。【亮点回放】
这篇文章句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 It is a common phenomenon that the problem of traffic jam around our school is more and more serious due to parents’ driving kids to and from school.（①划线部分作phenomenon的同位语从句，②more and more serious越来越严重③due to原因是④parents’ driving kids to and from school家长从家到学校接送孩子）
2. Actually, we can choose a healthy and environmentally-friendly way of traveling, that is, bicycle riding.（that is作插入语）
3. such as relieving pressure on the downtown transportation, making less noise and air pollution and so forth.（such as比如说，and so forth如此，等等）
4. Most importantly,（更重要的是）
九.阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Kari Watkins loves hanging out with her friends. That's not surprising. Kari is 16 and it's typical for teenagers to spend time with their peers, especially their pals. So it makes sense when she gets mad about having to leave get-togethers with her friends early to meet her parents' rule that she must stay at home after 9 p.m.
"Sometimes my parents don't let me do anything," Kari says. "It seems that their rules are for a 10-year-old child, not a 16-year-old one." Kari admits she often responds to her parents' rules by openly complaining about them. And to get her pride again, she sometimes does what she wants--behind her parents' backs.
Kari's unwillingness to obey her parents may remind you of your own behavior toward your mom and dad. And the good news for young people is that it is normal for teens to rebel against their parents. "All teens go through a process of separating from their parents in order to gain some independence and a sense of identity," says Glenn Kashurba, a child and adolescent psychiatrist (精神病学家). "Sometimes this process is accompanied by some anger, defiance (反抗), and eye-rolling. But this stage of shifting relationships is an important part of growing up."
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈“青少年心理叛逆期”，内容包括：
1) 你或你熟悉的朋友在青少年心理叛逆期的表现以及父母的态度；
2) 在心理叛逆期，你是如何改善和父母的关系。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
青少年心理叛逆期的表现以及父母的态度；在心理叛逆期，你是如何改善和父母的关系。
As an adolescent, Kari goes through an unavoidable but significant growing-up process of showing her personality and establishing independence by doing what will annoy her parents to rebel against them.
I have the similar experience like Kari. It seemed that everything I did never satisfied my
parents. I thought I had grown up, and I could make my own decision, enjoy my favorite films
or music, and wear the fashionable clothes and have a special hair style and so on. It is the difference between my parents and me that makes us involved in endless complain and quarrel with each other.
Eventually, I come to realize that it is no use rebelling against my parents, and I should do something to improve the relationship between us. I begin to discuss everything with my
parents, and do housework without being asked. What’s more, I will go back home early and don’t make them worried about my safety. Gradually, my parents know I have a sense of responsibility, and let me do more what I want.
【亮点回放】
这篇文章材料概括准确，内容结合实际符合要求，篇章连贯 Kari goes through an unavoidable but significant growing-up process of showing her personality and establishing independence by doing what will annoy her parents to rebel against them.（Kari经历了一次不可避免但很有意义的成长历程，她通过惹恼父母以示反抗的行为来显示个性和确立独立地位。）
2. It seemed that everything I did never satisfied my parents.（that及后面部分引导的是表语从句，在这个表语从句中I did修饰先行词everything作everything的定语从句。）
3. and so on（如此等等）
4. What’s more（表示递进，然而/还有...的意思，独立使用，more后面不加词和句 Gradually, my parents know I have a sense of responsibility, and let me do more what I want.（what I want作代词more的定语从句）
十. （江苏省南通市2011届高三三模）假设最近某校就同学们的习惯养成问题展开了广泛的讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为 A good habit, a successful life的短文，发表在该校的网站上。
良好的学习习惯 1．及时预习；
2．认真听课；
3．独立作业；
……
良好的生活习惯 1．健康饮食；
2．经常锻炼；
3．珍惜时间；
……
为何要养成良好习惯 (请考生结合自身认识，给出一至两点)
如何改掉不良习惯 (请考生结合自身感受，给出一至两点)
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
A good habit, a successful life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.为何要养成良好习惯如何改掉不良习惯A good habit, a successful life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.
Good habits of learning, such as previewing what you will study, listening to teachers attentively in class, completing given assignments by yourself and reviewing what you’ve learned in time, will help you acquire more knowledge and improve your skills. Meanwhile, good habits of living will make you develop soundly, both physically and mentally. Therefore you must attach importance to healthy food, constant exercise, reasonable schedules and eyesight protection.
Good habits contribute to our success. Once a good habit is formed, it will give us power to control ourselves. While we are making efforts to form good habits, we should try to kick bad
habits. Though bad habits are hard to get rid of, yet we all know where there is a will, there is a way. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly, we are sure to remove them.
Do remember good habits will give us a successful life.