2016届高考英语一轮复习全方位配套训练人教版必修一Unit 4 Earthquakes短文改错1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1
Dear Jerry，
I’m glad to receive your letter ask me what I’d like to be in the future.To be honest，I had dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was nine.I hurt one of my leg one day，that made me feel that I would not be able to walk any more.Unluckily，I was able to leave my bed a month later thanks to a doctor，who was very friendly and carefully.He gave me the courage I needed it to recover.Beside，while in hospital，I see many sick people.Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in deed my help.I am believe my dream will be-come true one day if I study hard now.
答案：
Dear Jerry，
I’m glad to receive your letter me what I’d like to be in the
future.To be honest，I dreamed of becoming a doctor since I was
nine.I hurt one of my one day， made me feel that I would not
be able to walk any more.， I was able to leave my bed a
month later thanks to a doctor，who was very friendly and.He gave me the courage I needed it to recover.，while in hospital，I many sick people.Since then I’ve decided to be a doctor so that I can work for people who are sick and in deedmy
help.I am believe my dream will become true one day if I study hard now.
Passage 2
During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It抯 both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when I found eme high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains，fields，river and so on were interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all，it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car.
答案：
During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I
travel by train or bus.It’s both cheaper and .But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the
I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became
when I found
high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains，fields， and so on were interestingly small.I
the frightening
comfortable journey very much.After all，it is more interesting
take a plane than to take a car.
Passage 3
The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came the crossroads，a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’ve found you at last，” they said.Or we didn’t know them.Pointed to a policeman not far away，a young man explained，“He stopped us about half an hour before and made us to catch the next offender.So come on! Stand here.Hope you won’t have to wait as soon as we did.Good luck.”
答案：
The other day my brother and
went to the cinema by bike.My brother
riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came
the crossroads，a young man and a girl came up and
us.“We’ve found you at last，” they said.we didn’t know them. to a policeman not far away， young man explained，“He stopped us about half an hour
and made us to
catch the next offender.So come on! Stand here.Hope you won’t have to wait as
as we did.Good luck.”