成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（5）附参考范文
高考英语书面表达要求学生通过审查文字提示、图画、表格等后进行有一定控制性的写作。学生在这种题型上常犯的错误之一就是：遗漏要点。
●难点磁场
6月9日，星期天，你和朋友本来约好去看球赛，但未看成。请你根据下列六幅图画写一篇日记。
注意：（1）日记必须包括所有图画内容，可以适当增减细节，使日记连贯；
（2）词数100左右。（3）开头已给出。
June 9,Sunday
Fine
It is Sudnay today.…
●案例探究
10月23日（星期五）中午在你上学途中发生了一件事情。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
注意：（1）日记须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增减细节，使日记连贯。
（2）词数100左右。
命题意图：本题考查学生的读图能力和运用逻辑讲述故事、传达主旨的能力。
错解分析：（1）人称、时态运用不准确；（2）主要内容遗漏。
解题技巧与方法：（1）细读文字说明部分，弄清人称、时间、事件背景；（2）仔细观察每一幅图，确定文章中心，确定内容要点：a.听见喊救命，下水救女孩
b.好心人相助
c.送女孩去医院
d.上课迟到
e.感谢信
f.受表扬；（3）依据要点写出提纲，然后拓展成文；（4）检查要点、格式、人称、时态、动词变化形式、标点符号等。
参考答案：
October 23rd
Friday
Fine
On my way to school at noon I heard loud shouts from the lake.I found a girl struggling in the water.I quickly jumped into the lake,swam towards the drowning girl and carried her to the bank.A kind woman also came to help.We immediately sent the girl to the nearest hospital.When I hurried to school,I was late for class.However,I didn抰 explain to my teacher what had happened.But to my surprise,a letter of thanks to me was put up on the bulletin board in our school in the afternoon.So my teacher and clalssmates knew the whole thing and they praised me a lot.I felt a little shy but proud.
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高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作
高考英语作文范文
4． 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60％的同学认为 1．不应该收门票 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象
40％的同学认为 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高 2．支付园林工人工资 3．购新花木
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks．
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
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高考英语：写作综合训练集
写作【看图写话篇】
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假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“A Volunteer Day”的英文稿件。
请根据以下四幅图所提供的情景，叙述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活动的完整过程。
注意：
1、短文的开头已为你写好。
2、词数不少于60。
提示词语： patrol vt. 巡视 trim vt. 修整
Possible version:
Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes.
At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school. We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day.
What a valuable experience I had in the high school! I’ll remember it forever. (184)
本文为一篇记叙文，其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易，因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景，而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面并按照时间顺序展开叙述。
考生在写作的时候，要尽量避免逐条翻译以及过于平铺直叙。在每一幅图画描述的过程中，可以在紧扣文章的基础上，增加适当的发挥和议论。图画作文若想得到高分，一定要让阅卷人看到文章的时候。有一种身临其境，饶有兴趣的感觉。
还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样，段落结构多样。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。
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高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）
8. 假如你叫王平，根据图表提示，给你的加拿大网友Smith 写一封信，介绍你的寒假生活（共20天），可根据自己的实际情况添加细节。
注意：1．词数：100左右； 2．开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.
We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away. Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a number of science problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.
In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Ping
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高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）
9．根据下列图示以 “The New Grading System in Our School”为题为你校英语报写一篇短文,说明这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识.
要求: 1.词数 100左右, 已给出部分不包括在内.
生词: 评分体制grading system
参与participation（n.）① tests
④ class participation
② notes
⑤ team work
③ homework
The New grading system in Our School
In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.
The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.
In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves on all sides.
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