郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（1）附参考范文

　　郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（1）附参考范文

　　（全国新课标卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a

　　buying

　　ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to

　　there

　　Xiamen for∧ long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag

　　A

　　and

　　Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my

　　money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very

　　in

　　were

　　strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to

　　luggage

　　friend’s

　　me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

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　　(2012湖北荆门钟祥一中五月适应)

　　请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　In your school life，maybe there's a certain teacher who you will never forget.Tell us the reasons why he or she makes you unforgettable.

　　注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　④词数为120左右。

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　　参考答案

　　One possible version：

　　In my school life，I have met many people who are really worth my recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person is my math teacher.

　　She was really open­minded and funny.Not only did she help us in class but also after class.I still remember one time I got a “B” in the final exam.I liked math best and the teacher took pride in me all the time，however，I failed.I felt so frustrated that I lost my energy and confidence.Then one day，I happened to meet her in the street，my face turned red right away.To my surprise，she patted me on the shoulder with a smile，asked me not to give up and even encouraged me to work harder.Later，she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math.In addition，she gave me every chance to show my thought about all kinds of problems，with whose help，I made great progress.

　　短文改错

　　Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field.

　　参考答案：

　　Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public on elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin and where began programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior his year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would developing guided be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be ∧success in the IT field. valuea

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　　高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）

　　***、下列图表反映的是我校2002年与2005年学生健康状况调查的部分数据。请你用英文为某报写一份报告，反映该校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况，分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施（不少于两条）。

　　注意：1．报告必须包括图表中所有内容。

　　2．词数：120左右。第一句已给出（不计入总词数）。

　　A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years . The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005 , and that of overweight , from 36% to 52.4%. Compared to 2002 nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do . Besides , over 15% more students has become mentally unhealthy .

　　To improve students’ health , we call for less homework . Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from getting nearsighted . Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight . With their heavy burdens removed , students can then be mentally healthy.

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　　高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文

　　例4：目前，有不少中学生不做家务，一些父母认为：中学生学习负担重，首要任务是学习。再者，中学生也不知道怎样做家务。请你就此用英文给一家报社写一篇短文，阐述你的观点和看法。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数：100左右;

　　2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

　　Nowadays, some students don't help their parents do housework at home.

　　Some parents love their children too much and don't let them work at home. On one hand, they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only. On the other hand, they think their children don't know how to do the housework.

　　However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home. First, that can develop their love for work. Next, that can help them understand their parents better. Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.

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　　高考英语书面表达指导

　　写作中的常用句型

　　以下是写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1~2个,作到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。

　　1.表示原因 

　　1）There are three reasons for this.

　　2）The reasons for this are as follows.

　　3）The reason for this is obvious.

　　4）The reason for this is not far to seek.

　　5）The reason for this is that...

　　6）We have good reason to believe that...

　　例如:

　　There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

　　注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。例如:Great changes have taken place in our life.There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

　　2.表示好处

　　1）It has the following advantages.

　　2）It does us a lot of good.

　　3）It benefits us quite a lot.

　　4）It is beneficial to us.

　　5）It is of great benefit to us.

　　例如:

　　Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

　　3.表示坏处 

　　1）It has more disadvantages than advantages.

　　2）It does us much harm.

　　3）It is harmful to us.

　　例如:

　　However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.

　　4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 

　　1）It is important（necessary,difficult,convenient,possible）for sb.to do sth.

　　2）We think it necessary to do sth.

　　3）It plays an important role in our life.

　　例如:

　　Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.

　　5.表示措施 

　　1）We should take some effective measures.

　　2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties.

　　3）We should do our utmost in doing sth.

　　4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with.

　　例如:

　　The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.

　　6.表示变化 

　　1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years.

　　2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.

　　3）The computer has brought about many changes in education.

　　例如:

　　Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.

　　7.表示事实、现状 

　　1）We cannot ignore the fact that...

　　2）No one can deny the fact that...

　　3）There is no denying the fact that...

　　4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.

　　5）However,that’s not the case.

　　例如:

　　We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.

　　8.表示比较

　　1）Compared with A,B...

　　2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV.

　　3）There is a striking contrast between them.

　　例如:

　　Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.

　　9.表示数量 

　　1）It has increased（decreased）from...to...

　　2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800 000.

　　3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January

　　例如:

　　With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.

　　再如:

　　From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.

　　10.表示看法

　　1）People have（take,adopt,assume）different attitudes towards sth.

　　2）People have different opinions on this problem.

　　3）People take different views of（on）the question.

　　4）Some people believe that...Others argue that...

　　例如:

　　People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.

　　再如:

　　Do “lucky numbersreally bring good luck？Different people have different views on it.

　　注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。

　　11.表示结论 

　　1）In short,it can be said that...

　　2）It may be briefly summed up as follows.

　　3）From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that...

　　例如:

　　From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however,its method should be improved.

　　注:例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。

　　12.套语 

　　1）It’s well known to us that...

　　2）As is known to us,...

　　3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about.

　　4）From the graph（table,chart）listed above,it can be seen that...

　　5）As a proverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.” 

　　例如:

　　As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.

　　The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower”.

　　As college students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.

　　再如:

　　Does it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.

　　第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，共10分）

　　以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：请在答题卡上作答。

　　    Late in April, a photo show was held in our school.  

　　    It lasted a week and was great success! All the photos were taken

　　76. ________

　　by the students themselves. They were most color photos, but

　　77. ________

　　some were black-and-white ones, presented our school life, the beauty 78. ________

　　of nature, festival activities and so on. All the work of art were

　　79. _______

　　at show in the reading-room on the second floor. Every day a large

　　80. ________

　　number of students went to enjoy them, but they were surprised to

　　81.________

　　find the photos were such wonderful that some teachers also were

　　82. ________

　　present. Those whose photos were chosen the best are given different

　　83. ________

　　prizes. In the short, this photo show really made our life more colorful. 84. ________

　　We hope we will have much more activities like this in our school.

　　85. ________

　　76. was 后加a

　　77.most---mostly

　　78.presented----presenting /

　　在presented前面加which

　　79.work---works

　　80.at---on

　　81.but---and

　　82.such---so

　　83.are---were

　　84.删掉the

　　85 much--- many

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　　高考英语：写作综合训练集-------B

　　请仔细观察下面两幅图画，理解其含义，然后就“人与自然”这一话题写一篇英语短文。

　　注意:

　　1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　2. 词数：120左右。

　　A One possible version：

　　Nature is to us what water is to fish. Yet we don’ t always realize it until it is too late. With the development of modern technology, there are more and more people on the earth and fewer and fewer resources left. What’s worse, pollution is getting more and more serious and the climate is becoming warmer and warmer. So we must do something to protect not only our next generation but also ourselves. As is shown in the pictures, we plant trees and we will enjoy the shade ourselves as well as our grandchildren. If we do something good to nature, it will do more to us.

　　本题是一篇议论类看图写话。本文应用第一人称、时态用一般现在时。内容要点：1.论述人与自然的关系；2.结合图画进一步阐述人与自然关系的重要意义。本文也可采取下面的写作方式：1.介绍图画的基本内容并引出论点；2.根据前文的论点展开论述。

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