郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（4）附参考范文
passage 5
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1___
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2_____
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could
3____
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later,
4____
I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5___
encouraging words.I will always remember what you
6____
said, 揑f you try to, you can be No 1 !擨 hope you`ve
___
had pleasant journey home and will come to china
___
again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9____
and send you the photos we take together
10____
or【参考答案】KEY 5
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. for
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in
no
English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could
terrible
only speak a few words.But one and a half year later,
years
I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your
is
encouraging words.I will always remember what you
right
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve
/to
had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china
a
again sometimes in the future.I will write again sometime
and send you the photos we take together
took
***********************************************************结束
****************************************************结束
高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文
(4)(25 min.)
(2012·长郡月考)假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容：
1. 安全意识的重要性；
2. 在运动中要注意安全；
3. 在校内要注意人身安全；
4. 同学间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智；
5. 逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。
注意：
1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
2. 词数不少于120。
参考词汇： 校园安全 safety at school
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version：
My dear classmates,
There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay in.
I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.
As far as I'm concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and try to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind. Besides, we are supposed to observe the law discipline wherever we are at any moment.
Thanks.
********************************************************结束
(2012武汉武昌五月调研)
请根据以下提示，结合自己的学习生活，就“如何缓解压力”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的建议或做法。
Nowadays students study hard and they are always under a lot of pressure.It's necessary for them to have some ways to ease stress and minds.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
One possible version：
Pressure is a common serious problem nowadays.Many students in our class worry about their exams.
Much pressure as we have from our studies，we need a relaxation after heavy work to renew our energy.Furthermore，burying ourselves all day under piles of books is not the only way to study.
I'm always under pressure，too.My parents expect me to go to a key university.One evening，I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy and I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.
So I think a conversation with parents or teachers or good friends is an essential way to solve the problem.Besides，we can listen to music after class or we can even cry or shout in the open in order to refresh ourselves.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行作出判断如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in
69_________
a rainy day. We would be much happier and are able to study
70_________
better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters,
71_________
photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons
72_________
and enrich our lives. Original art work are too expensive, but
73_________
unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. Using only a
74_________
little money, it can make our school a nicer place.
75_________
参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy
67. we后加are
68. thought→think
69. in→on
70 去are或are→be
71.正确
72.that→which
73.work→works
74. unless→if
75. it→we综合练(1)（参考范文）
发言稿篇
90后出生的学生，思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是一名90后出生的学生刘林，请根据下表中所提供信息以"Do trust us-a generation born in the 90s"为题写一篇英语演讲稿，以消除人们的忧虑。 90后的境遇 面临更多的升学和就业烦恼，所处环境竞争更加激烈。 人们的忧虑 1．注重自我，轻视合作，...... 2．缺乏毅力，容易气馁，...... 3．盲目追求，渴望成名，...... 我们的长处 敢于挑战，...... （请考生联系自己拟定内容，再列举两至三点。） 注意：1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2．词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3．演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”. Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern. They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. Besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future. However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. In addition, we are quick-minded and creative. We can do our work more efficiently. Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced. Please do trust us! Thank you for your listening!
faithfully,
Li Hua
文章针对90s后的特点，让学生写一篇演讲稿。文章素材贴近学生生活实际，他们本身作为90s后所以他们感到格外亲切，有话可说。文章人称用第一、三人称；时态应用现在时态。
***********************************************************结束
高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）
2. 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：1．词数：100左右2．生词：通讯：communicate互联网：the Internet
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life.
In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
****************************************************************结束
(201*·重庆调研)
Today is Sunday. We had not lessons. After breakfast1.________
I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me.2.________He asked me to go to the cinema with he. I agreed, but3.________
I have to finish my homework first. About an hour later，4.________
we went out. In the way we saw Kate; she was mending5.________
her bike. She looked very worry.“Let us help you.” Li Lei6.________
and I all said. “All right.” And we stopped to help her.7.________
There was nothing much wrong with the bike, so it cost8.________
us only several minutes time to finish it. Kate was very 9.________
thankful. When we hurried to the cinema, the film had10.________
been on for ten minutes. But we felt happy.
答案与解析：
1．not→no “没有课”应是have no lessons或don't have any lessons。
2．去掉with do是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语。
3．he→him 介词后跟代词时要用宾格。
4．have→had 本文是叙述过去发生的事情。
5．In→On “在……途中”是on the way。
6．worry→worried “她看上去很着急”，应该用形容词作表语。
7．all→both 因为只有我和李蕾两人。
8．cost→took “花费时间做什么”要用It takes some time to do something。
9．去掉time 有具体的时间名词minutes，无须再用time。
10．√
*************************************************************结束
【1】
据报道，几位慈善人士最近几年一直在资助五名贫困大学生，但是，这些学生从来没有表达过他们的感激之情，所以这几位慈善人士决定停止资助。此事在社会上引起了广泛的争论，某英文报为此在读者中展开了调查。请你以“Do They Have to Say Thanks？”为题，根据下列表格中所列信息及要求用英语写一篇短文，投到该报的“Readers’ Letters”栏目。
赞成的理由 不赞成的理由 你的看法
1．别人没有义务帮你；
2．学生们会变得自私。 1．说“谢谢”不是唯一的感谢方2．帮助别人本身就是一种快乐。 ……
注意：1．词数不少于120个；
2．参考词汇：捐赠donate。
【1】【参考范文Do They Have to Say Thanks?
Do they have to say thanks？Some people say yes．They think when others donate money to us，we should be thankful．After all，it’s not others’ duty to help us．Besides，if people continue helping the five students，they will take it for granted．As a result， they will become selfish．
Others，however，think the students need not say thanks．They think saying “thanks” in words is not the only way to show appreciation．Studying hard and doing something in return for society in the future are the best way to show their thanks．On the other hand，helping others is a kind of happiness．
In my opinion，maybe some students are not good at expressing their feelings．But when getting help，they should say “Thank you”．