成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文
【写作要求】
根据提示的情景，用英文写一篇80-100词的短文。不必根据中文逐字逐句翻译。
【学生实作】
Our school has a long history. It is told that it dated from one hundred years ago. From it was founded on, there were more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studying. Some of them are outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed great, it becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students study very hard, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school.
We like our school very much! We are proud of it!
【评析】
1． 第2句：is told 应为is said。（以下错误均在第一段）
2． 第2句：dated应改为dates。
3． 3句：from...on不能表示从过去的某个时间一直到现在的情况，因此这里用since较好。另外，from...on中间应是名词，而不能是从句。
4． 第3句：主句中应用现在完成时态，表示从过去一直到现在的情况。把there were改为there have been。
5． 第4句：studying最好改为studies，指"学业"。
6． 第5句：本句应是说以前的学生的情况，are应改为were。
7． 第7句：great应改为greatly。修饰动词应用副词形式。
8． 第7句：our school has changed greatly是一个完整的句子，其后也是一个完整的句子，而两个完整的句子没有连词时是不能并列的。最好中间用句号，使各自独立成句。
9． 第9句：study改为are studying更为生动。
10． 第9句：very hard最好改为even harder，以对应前面的比较级。
优点 ：
1． 基本写出了题目要求的几方面的内容。
2． 这是一篇半开放的写作。习作者适当地增补细节对内容进行了展开，使内容较为全面、丰富。
3． 语句表达较为连贯。
1． 有一处句与句之间没有连词连接的情况，这是不符合英语习惯的。
2． 谓语动词的时态有几处运用不当。
Our school has a long history. It is said that it dates from one hundred years ago. Since it was founded, there have been more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studies. Some of them were outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed greatly. It becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students are studying even harder, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school.
We like our school very much! We are proud of it!
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高考英语书面表达讲义：环境资源话题作文
例1：近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：
有人建议
你的建议
1、不浪费粮食和纸张
2、尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋
3、毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?
注意：
1、不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;
2、词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;
3、参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks
Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.
Some students suggest that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.
Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.
例2：假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看法写出来。
所谓的生态游
欣赏风景，享受新鲜空气
有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾
真正的生态游
享受自然，同时也是一种责任
要保护自然，保护野生动物
带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水
Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing.. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.
I don't think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.
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(一)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：
段首句
1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to………Some people suggest that____.
2.俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying ……It’s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many case seven today.
3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……
Today，……，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First，……Second，…….
What makes things worse is that…….
4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。
Nowadays，it is common to ……,Many people like ……because…….Besides，…….
5.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。
Every coins has two sides and ……is not an exception.
6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about…… vary from person to person. Some people say that……,To them，…….
7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem……which is becoming more and more serious.
8. …… 已成为人的关注的热门话题 ，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
……has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重
的问题。
……has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，
It can be seen that ……while .Obviously，……，but why？
中间段落句
1.相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of …….At the same time，they say…….
2.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve …….For example，…….Worst of all，…….
3.首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
First，…….What’s more，…….Most important of all，…….
4.面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，
Confronted with……，we should take a series of effective measures to …….For one thing，……For another，……
5.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example .…….In addition. …….All
the measures will certainly……….
6.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However，just like everything has both its good and bad sides，………also has its own disadvantages，such as……….
7.尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless，I believe that……is more advantageous.
8.完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that……because…….
(三)高考英语作文议论文常用句型：结尾句
1.至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent .I think that……
2.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
In a word，the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of……Only in this way can……in the future.
3.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于……
But……and……have her own advantages .For example，……while……Comparing this with that，however，I prefer to……
4.就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally，I believe that……Consequently，I‘m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because……
5.随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society，…… necessary to……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society，it will be better and better.
6.至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……
For my part，I think it reasonable to……Only in this way can you……
7.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….however，from a personal point of view find……
8.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above，we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that……
9.如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means，we may not control this trend，and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly，so what we should do is……I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.
As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.
Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.
Yours,
Li Hua
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高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类
6. 假如你叫王东，你的叔叔三十年前离开家乡去了美国。不久前，他观看China Report节目，得知中国决定加大建设社会主义新农村的力度，感慨万分，于是发了一份e-ma给你，询问近来家乡的变化情况。请根据email内容和提示要点，给你叔叔做简要回复。E-mail开头和结尾已经给出。
日期：20-03-2006
发件人：Wanguifu usa@hotmail.com
收件人：Wangdong_88@l63com
主题：T0 XiaodongDear Xiao Dong
How are you doing?
The other day when 1 was watching China Report CCTV at home, I was excited to learn that the Chinese government is calling on her people to speed up the reconstruction of their countryside. The report at once took my thoughts back to the small village I once lived in.
The houses were old and low. The roads were muddy and narrow. Villagers had to go a long way on foot or by bike in order to do some shopping or see a doctor in town. Because of very small income, villagers lived quite a plain life, even without TV sets or telephones.
How time flies!. It is 30 years since I left my home village. It must have changed a lot. Would you please write and tell me something about its changes?
Remember me to your parents!
Yours，
Wang Guifu．叔叔离家后，家乡变化很大。．生活条件愈来愈好。
．房子大而宽敞，许多人住进了设施齐全的公寓。．装了电话，买了彩电、洗衣机、冰箱等。．宽敞的道路连接了村庄和城镇。
．买了拖拉机、卡车和汽车。．学校教育良好。．政府重视农村城市化建设。
1)、词数：左右。2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯I’m very glad to receive your email .
Great changes have already taken place since you left , Our living conditions are getting better and better. Villagers have moved into big and comfortable houses, and many live in
well-equipped blocks of flats. Almost all have been equipped with telephones . They have not only bought color TV sets , but also washing machines , fridges, etc. Wide roads have been built to connect villages and towns. Some families have got their own tractors, trucks or even cars. Besides, children can now enjoy very good education.
Our government cares very much about the reconstruction of our countryside . We are speeding up the citifying of the villages .
I hope that you and aunt will come back and have a visit to the new village .
Best wishes .
Yours
Xiao Dong
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