成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（11）附参考范文
高考英语书面表达讲义：日记
1．下面六幅图画描述了你和同学们2月8日去学校附近的湖上滑冰的情况。请根据图画内容用英语写一篇日记。
注意：1.日记必须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增加细节，使短文连贯。
2.词数100左右。
【参考范文】
February 8th,SundayFine
It was cold today. My classmates and I went skating on the lake. As soon as we got there, we began to skate happily. While enjoying myself, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care, the ice broke and he slipped into the water.
I was too frightened to know what to do. I anxiously ran to school to call my teacher for help. Hearing my cry, Mr.Zhang rushed over, telling us to phone 120 to call for doctors, and jumped into the lake to save Xiao Ming, who was struggling in the cold water. At last, he was saved and no sooner had doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital. It was not long before Xiao Ming's parents came. They expressed their thanks to Mr.Zhang.
What a respectable teacher he is!
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充分发挥你的想象力，写一篇100词左右的文章。题目为My Dream House。内容包括以下几点：
1． 房子由什么建成；
2． 有什么优点（如：不怕水火、保温隔热、随处移动等）；
3． 家具，能源。 One Possible Version
My Dream House
My dream house is made of a kind of special paper, which can't be easily destroyed by floods or fires. When floods hit our area, it can float on the surface of the water. And all the doors will be closed at once. The furniture in the house is also made of special materials, which can't be broken, either.
Our house can keep us warm in winter and cool in summer. We use solar energy instead of traditional fuels, so our house is environmentally friendly. Made of paper, it is so light that it can move to anywhere you like, what's more, it has wheels and wings.
Such is my dream house.
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你的家乡是一个依山傍水的小镇。过去，这里人们生活极其贫困。解放以后，人们生活的各个方面都发生了很大变化。请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍该镇的变化情况。
约20万
约360平方公里
坐落在大山脚下，面临一条大河，新建有许多工厂、商店、医院、学校
教育状况 解放前只有一所学校，只有富家子弟可以上学，现在有10所学校，每个孩子都可以上学
丰富多彩，人们工作之余，可以逛商店、看电影、跳舞、参加体育活动等
参考范文
One Possible Version
My hometown is a small town. It has a population of more than 200 thousand people and an area of 36 square kilometers. It is at the foot of a mountain. In front of the town lies a big river.
Before liberation, people there lived a hard life. Great changes have taken place there since liberation. They have built many factories, shops, hospitals and schools.
The school education has also improved. Before liberation there was only one school. Only the rich children could go to school. Now there are 10 schools. Every child can go to school.
People's lives are colorful. After work they go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports. They all live a happy life.
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高考英语书面表达指导
英语书面表达经典句型必背
1.英语作文中常用关联词:
并列关系:and,as well as,also...
递进关系:besides,in addition,moreover,what’s more...
转折关系:but,yet,however,although,otherwise,or,in spite of,despite,instead of,in the end...
时间顺序:while,when,soon after,before,afterward,finally,first,then,next,as soon as ...
比较、对比:like,unlike,on the contrary,on the other hand...
总结:in a word,in general,in short,above all,after all,generally speaking...
进一步阐述:in other words,that is to say,for example,for instance,such as ...
因果关系:as a result,so,thus,therefore...
2.常用句式
记事
①At first he didn’t hear anything at all.
②But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.
③Following that came a man’s voice,saying,“Come out,or I will break in!”
④Several minutes later,he heard someone leave.
⑤Finally he got up,opened the door and looked around.
写人
①She is a girl of twelve years old.
②She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
③Being kind and helpful,she always enjoys helping others out.
④In her spare time,she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.
⑤She gets on well with almost anyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.
⑥There is a boy crying outside.
介绍某地
①Liaoning Province lies in the northeast of China.
②It is rich in many kinds of natural resources,such as coal and petrol.
③It has a population of 23 million.
④It is terribly cold in winter and very hot in summer there.
⑤The people there are friendly and hardworking and their hospitality will never fail to give you a deep impression.
⑥Our school covers 2.5 square miles.It lies in the north of the city.The teaching building stands in the front of the school,on its left is the administrative building,and on its right is a football field.After walking across a small bridge we can see our dining-hall.Four students’ dormitory buildings stand in line with a lot of trees around them and a river running by.
通知用语
①Attention,please!/May I have your attention,please!
②The sports meet to be held tomorrow is canceled due to the bad weather.
③A meeting is to be held in Room 203 at two o’clock tomorrow afternoon.
④Please take a pen and notebook with you and be there on time.
⑤That’s all,thank you!
写信
①Dear Tom,I’m very glad to receive your letter.
②I am fine but very busy recently,learning English.
③I have been strictly following the advice given by you in your last letter and have made some progress so far.
④Please remember me to your parents.
⑤Yours truly,Li Ming.
议论和高级句型
①In my opinion,I prefer traveling by train rather than by plane.
②For one thing,a train ticket is much cheaper than a plane ticket.
③For another,you can enjoy the beautiful views outside the train window.
④Above all,it’s safer traveling on a train than traveling in a plane.
⑤In a word,I will always travel by train if I’m not in a great hurry.
6.I hold the view that we should wear school uniform all day.
7.From this passage we can draw a conclusion that drinking a lot is bad for our health.
8.From this diagram we can infer/it can be inferred that in 2008 the number of mobile phones will be twice as big as that now.
9.There are 95% of the students who think it is not useful to stay up to study at night because the next day they will feel very tired.
10.The fact leads us to believe most of us do get a good result in the NMET this year.
11.I am not for/am against/oppose/don’t agree to/object to the idea of building a new highway because of the great cost.
12.What I want to emphasize is the fact that they are only children.
13.Being a Senior three student,he will never let his parents down(使父母失望).
14.Having finished his homework,he went to bed.
15.Running,biking and swimming are popular in summer.
16.It took us only five yuan to buy this pen.This pen just costs five yuan.I only spent five yuan on/(in) buying this pen.I only paid five yuan for this pen.
17.It is said/reported/considered/thought that the more pressure you have,the worse result you will get.
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高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类
9. 假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。内容要如下：
⑴．该工作主要包括两部分：一是从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章；二是选择与编辑同学们的来稿。
⑵．希望该同学满足下列要求：
① 乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务； ② 英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑。
③ 感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（Students’ Union）联系。
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
An English Editor Wanted
Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．
We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of
spare time to serving the others．Second, it’s necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine art the ability to use the computer is important．
Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week．
Students’ Union假定你是某市居民，名叫李华。你觉得该市出租车行业问题较多，请写一封信给该市市长，内容应包括： 问题 (1)停靠点太少，不易打的;(2)欺诈外地乘客;(3)车速过快，事故频频; (4)仍有拒载者;(5)深夜聚集在娱乐场所外等客时制造噪音，影响他人休息。 建议 要求加强管理 注意：1.字数100词左右。文章开头已给出。 2.参考词汇：绕道：take a roundabout route 不替别人着想的：inconsiderate (adj.) 行业：trade加强管理：tighten control over…Dear Mayor,
I’m a resident of the city. I feel there are many problems existing in the trade of taxi in our city. First of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a taxi. And taxis often run very fast, which causes many traffic accidents. What’s more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick up some passengers without any reason. Another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night taxis waiting around the entertainment places make much noise. Many people suffer from this inconsiderate action. A friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our city’s taxi drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route. What will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience?
I think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade. Maybe the first thing to do is raise the taxi drivers’ professional morality.
We are looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua
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高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类
13. 下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。
Dear editor.
I am an active girl, and I speak and laugh loudly in the classroom, like a boy. I don’t care about small matters. On the contrary, my neighbor, the girl who sits next to me, speaks quietly and dare not do the things I often do. I can understand this.
What I can’t stand is that she often gets angry with me about small things. How can I get along with her?
yours
Sunny,
注意：1．书信格式要规范；
2．回信需就原信内容给出至少三条建议（如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等）；3)．字数：120左右。Dear Sunny,
It’s very good that you want to be friends with this girl. In my opinion, you’d better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her, because understanding each other is very important for you two. And I also think it’s better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities, such as birthday parties, going out for a walk, discussing some fashionable topics, and so on. Besides, helping each other is also very important for both of you. Just share happiness and sadness with her. And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain you two will be good friends in the future. Good luck to you.
Yours,
Editor
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高考英语作文精选范文----应用文类
14. 假如你是李华，针对目前有些中学生购买彩票的现象，给21st Century 报社编辑写信，并谈谈自己的看法，其中包括以下要点：
．弊远大于利；．中学生没有经济来源，容易诱发一些不良行为；
．从当前说，会影响学习；．从长远看，会养成事事走捷径的侥幸心理，其危害将影响其一生。
注意（1）信的开头和结尾已经给出；（2）必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐句翻译；（3）字数100左右，不包括开头、结尾’d like to talk about my views on the phenomenon.
In my opinion , its disadvantages are far more than its advantages, despite one of their reasons that they can do something useful for society in this way . High school students can’t support themselves financially but depend on their parents for the moment. Thus, in order to collect money with which to buy lottery tickets, they may try every possible means , even commit crimes .
In addition, if they put their minds on lottery tickets, their lessons will be more or less affected. And in the long run, lottery ticket purchasing may contribute to their wrong understanding that there must be a shortcut to every destination , which will surely do great harm to their future life.
Therefore, I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now.
Yours ,
Li Hua
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