郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（10）附参考范文
(201*·郑州质检)
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．healthy→health 这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。
2．by→on/upon depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps 这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
4．but→and feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。
5．去掉them 这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming 应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。
7．去掉in every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。
8．giving→given 这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。
9．take前加to 此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。
10．√ (2)(25 min.)
(2012·浏阳一中月考)假如你是中学生李华。在一位名叫WolfDad的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm the father of a fourteenyearold boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?
写作要点：
1. 表明自己的看法；
2. 陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；
3. 提出至少两条建议。
写作要求：
1. 短文字数不少于120(不含已写好的部分)；
2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；
3. 书写须清晰、工整。
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【参考范文】One possible version：
Hi, WolfDad,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.
Yours,
Li Hua
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