郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文

　　郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文

　　短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that day, when she entered the classroom, we found out that she was a young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said we shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss. Liu. Late, she let us go to the blackboard and say something about ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid. I believe you can do well.” At last, I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.

　　【参考答案】

　　Never should I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. On that

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　　ourselves in English on turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shy that I don't dare

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　　to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, "Don't be

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　　praised me for that I had done

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　　高考英语书面表达讲义：日记

　　1．下面六幅图画描述了你和同学们2月8日去学校附近的湖上滑冰的情况。请根据图画内容用英语写一篇日记。

　　注意：1.日记必须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增加细节，使短文连贯。

　　2.词数100左右。

　　【参考范文】

　　February 8th,SundayFine

　　It was cold today. My classmates and I went skating on the lake. As soon as we got there, we began to skate happily. While enjoying myself, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The moment I warned Xiao Ming to take care, the ice broke and he slipped into the water.

　　I was too frightened to know what to do. I anxiously ran to school to call my teacher for help. Hearing my cry, Mr.Zhang rushed over, telling us to phone 120 to call for doctors, and jumped into the lake to save Xiao Ming, who was struggling in the cold water. At last, he was saved and no sooner had doctors arrived than he was sent to hospital. It was not long before Xiao Ming's parents came. They expressed their thanks to Mr.Zhang.

　　What a respectable teacher he is!

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