2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（2）附参考范文
(2012湖北荆门钟祥一中五月适应)
请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
In your school life，maybe there's a certain teacher who you will never forget.Tell us the reasons why he or she makes you unforgettable.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。
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参考答案
One possible version：
In my school life，I have met many people who are really worth my recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person is my math teacher.
She was really openminded and funny.Not only did she help us in class but also after class.I still remember one time I got a “B” in the final exam.I liked math best and the teacher took pride in me all the time，however，I failed.I felt so frustrated that I lost my energy and confidence.Then one day，I happened to meet her in the street，my face turned red right away.To my surprise，she patted me on the shoulder with a smile，asked me not to give up and even encouraged me to work harder.Later，she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math.In addition，she gave me every chance to show my thought about all kinds of problems，with whose help，I made great progress.
如何展开你的文章是英文写作必不可少的一步。如果不了解展开文章的技巧和方法，你的写作可能会是一篇糟糕透顶的、令读者大跌胃口的、不能称之为文章的文章。读完下面的tips，也许你会有所感悟。
I. Writing down ideas
As you begin to plan your writing, you may already have some ideas concerned with points you wish to write. Write them down on a sheet of paper or card as they come to you.
As you continue to study your subject, be sure to add further ideas and information. Your finished list might look something like this:
Topic: The School Library
Ideas:
1. a very well designed modern building
2. a large number of useful books
3. bright and quiet reading rooms
4. patient and helpful librarians...
II. Building a thesis sentence
Having completed your list of ideas, your next step is to build a thesis sentence by organizing those ideas in relation to each other, because while planning writing, you must make certain that you have a central idea in your mind. Such a central idea is called a thesis sentence.
As a thesis sentence indicates the central idea that you will develop in your paper, you should use only one in the writing.
You need not always express a thesis sentence in the paper itself, although you should clearly control the development of any writing that requires one. If you do use such a statement, it had better appear in the very first paragraph. Why? Because it works for the entire writing in the way a topic sentence does in a paragraph. It tells the readers of your paper what the "big idea" is-and also helps you keep on track in developing that idea.
Take your writing with the topic "The School Library" for example.
From our study of the school library we have got two possible thesis sentences:
1. The library is a nice place to study in.
2. The library plays an important part in both teaching and students' study and life.
III. Making an outline
One useful way of planning a piece of writing is a formal outline. An outline is an organized list of related items of ideas. Some people object to outlining. They believe that preparing a formal outline steals valuable time from actual writing and that an outline acts as a brake on the free flow of their ideas. Both objections make some sense. But time spent on an outline will be more than repaid when one begins to write. Also, few of us always think logically. So the final step in organizing your ideas is to make an outline.
Take your writing with the topic "The School Library" for example.
Topic: The School Library
Thesis: The school library plays an important part in both teaching and students' study and life.
Outline:
1. There are bright and quiet reading rooms in the library, so students can study and read in them.
2. Students borrow books from the library when they need reference books for their studies.
3. The library provides students with a large number of useful books
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高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文
例3：假如你是李华，是华文中学的学生会主席，为了丰富同学们的业余生活，提高同学们的英语水平，学生会组织了一个English club，请你写封邀请信，邀请同学们参加，内容应包括：
1. English club设立的目的
2. English club 要开展的活动
3. 邀请大家参加 English club
注意：开头、结尾已给出;
字数80-120; auditorium 礼堂
Boys and girls,
I'm the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you. To enrich our life on campus and improve our English, we, Student Union, set up an English club. Obviously, besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us. It is believed that the club can make our campus life colorful and rewarding. There goes the plan.
It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Tuesday evening. Apart from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Saturday evening; yet, the specific topics haven't been settled. If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.
I'll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club. You will never regret joining us. So, just do it.
Student Union
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高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文
例4：目前，有不少中学生不做家务，一些父母认为：中学生学习负担重，首要任务是学习。再者，中学生也不知道怎样做家务。请你就此用英文给一家报社写一篇短文，阐述你的观点和看法。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右;
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Nowadays, some students don't help their parents do housework at home.
Some parents love their children too much and don't let them work at home. On one hand, they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only. On the other hand, they think their children don't know how to do the housework.
However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home. First, that can develop their love for work. Next, that can help them understand their parents better. Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.
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高考英语书面表达指导
写作中的常用句型
以下是写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1~2个,作到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1.表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this.
2）The reasons for this are as follows.
3）The reason for this is obvious.
4）The reason for this is not far to seek.
5）The reason for this is that...
6）We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。例如:Great changes have taken place in our life.There are three reasons for this.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2.表示好处
1）It has the following advantages.
2）It does us a lot of good.
3）It benefits us quite a lot.
4）It is beneficial to us.
5）It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2）It does us much harm.
3）It is harmful to us.
例如:
However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary,difficult,convenient,possible）for sb.to do sth.
2）We think it necessary to do sth.
3）It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures.
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties.
3）We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with.
例如:
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.
3）The computer has brought about many changes in education.
例如:
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that...
2）No one can deny the fact that...
3）There is no denying the fact that...
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5）However,that’s not the case.
例如:
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比较
1）Compared with A,B...
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3）There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:
Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.
9.表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from...to...
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800 000.
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January
例如:
With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
再如:
From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10.表示看法
1）People have（take,adopt,assume）different attitudes towards sth.
2）People have different opinions on this problem.
3）People take different views of（on）the question.
4）Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如:
People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如:
Do “lucky numbersreally bring good luck？Different people have different views on it.
注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。
11.表示结论
1）In short,it can be said that...
2）It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3）From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that...
例如:
From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however,its method should be improved.
注:例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
12.套语
1）It’s well known to us that...
2）As is known to us,...
3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4）From the graph（table,chart）listed above,it can be seen that...
5）As a proverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”
例如:
As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower”.
As college students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.
再如:
Does it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
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