2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（5）附参考范文
请你根据下列提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈“感恩”的意义。
When we grow up，we often get a lot of love，support and help from our teachers，friends as well as our parents.However，we seldom express our gratitude to them.Being grateful to others is what we shouldn't forget.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②或者列举生活中一个事例，或者谈谈自己的看法；
③词数为120左右。
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参考范文
One possible version：
As middle school students，not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities.I think expressing our gratitude to people who helped us is one of the good qualities we must possess.
Two years ago，my classmate，Wang Wei ran into difficulty because his father was diagnosed with lung cancer.His father's illness added to his family's trouble，so Wang Wei was in danger of dropping out of school.After learning about his bad situation，our head teacher gave him timely help by allowing him to continue his schooling without any tuition.With the help of the teacher and classmates Wang has finished school.Just before this important exam he wrote us a letter expressing his sincere thanks for what we have done.We were deeply moved by his letter.
Being grateful to people who helped and supported us is what we are supposed to keep in mind forever.
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每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人。请你根据下Being a Popular Student”的英语短文，参加学校网站英
受人欢迎的
个性品质 对待集体 热心班级活动，具有团队精神，工作负责，……
对待他人 尊重、关心他人，富有同情心，……
对待自己 (请考生按照自己的实际拟定内容，列举至少两点)……
注意：1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．One possible version：
Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity．we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team．
o be students with high popularity，we are to show respect，concern and sympathy for others．And we should never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need．
be a popular student．we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports,music，paintin9，social services and so on．In time ofssuccess we remain modest，while in time of difficulty we keep stron—minded．
A in all,popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．
词数：不得少于70，不得多于140。
故事大意：宋人有耕者，田中有株(stump)，兔走触株，折颈而死。捡之甚喜，随后弃农而守株。一年后，田地荒芜，终不再获，而身为宋国笑。
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参考范文
One day a farmer of the kingdom of Song was ploughing the field. Suddenly he saw a rabbit dash into a stump. The rab- bit broke its neck and died soon. The farmer was very glad that he got a rabbit without any effort. From that day on, he left his ploughing and kept watching by the big tree all day long in hope of getting another rabbit this way. But a whole year pas- sed and he got none. Looking hack, he saw the field lie waste, overrun with weeds.
He became a laughing- stock of Song people.
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