【写作任务】
请你根据以下信息提示，介绍一款时尚手机。词数120一lS0左右。
1．作为高科技产品使用；这款手机在国内外被广泛地使用。
2．主要功能：通话、发短信、上网、照相、玩游戏等。
3．体积小，重量轻易携带：适用于各年龄段人群。
下面我就来教你产品推销广告的五步写法，打造产品推销广告吧。
第一步： 开头一定要有吸引力和诱惑力，能一下子吸引消费者的注意力，好的开头是作文成功的关键(此类作文有时有题目，如：Abrief IntroductiontO HaierGroup，有时也可以省略)。
第二步：一旦抓住了读者的注意力，就该趁热打铁劝服他们买自己的产品。介绍产品必须要紧紧围绕开头所提出的引人之处。只说“最好”、“最新”是没什么实际意义的。应该强调特性、质量、原材料，以及和同类产品相比最出彩的地方。
第三步： 通过产品介绍激起读者的购买欲望后，就该进一步加强读者购买的决心了。你可以详细说明并保证产品会给读者带来的好处。
第四步： 到了这一步，所有的努力都指向一个目标：促使客户采取行动、购买产品。这时语气要礼delay(拖延)；contact(联系)
●句型搜索：1etme introduce．．．(让我介绍……)；bemadein…(产于……)；be conve—
【参考范文】
Being a product of high-technology, this mobile phones are being more and more widely used. They are perhaps the most popular means of communication all over the world today. They are small in size. light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient services for communication. They are can be used m do all kinds of things for communication and entertainment.
The users use them for calling, sending short messages and Internet-surfing. Besides, they can be used to take photos and when you are flee. you can enjoy exciting games.
This mobile phone is suitable for people of all ages and all models are available.
实例指导2—Information Age
在互联网高速发展和普及的同时,"网络成瘾症"也随之出现,在青少年中表现得尤其突出,这影响了他们正常的学习、工作和家庭生活,也不利于他们的健康。请根据下面两幅图的内容,写一篇120-150词的英语短文,谈谈自己的看法和观点,并提出科学合理的处理意见和建议。
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参考词汇:成瘾be addicted to
容的描述与分析。(2)"网络成瘾症"的出现及其影响。(3)个人见解和建议。
4. 确定词句,连句成文定稿。对于话题的引入,可以从图画描述开始,用As we can see from the pictures, ...作为文章的开始；对于现象的成因及其影响的分析,可以从文字提示"互联网高速发展和普及,网络成瘾症出现"开始,用With the rapid development and popularity of the Internet ...来表达；提出个人见解和建议,可以使用:in my opinion, as far as I’m concerned, I think等。同时还要注意文章中句子之间的衔接和过渡。
Internet in a proper way, for example, to search for useful information. On the other hand, limit their time on the Internet. Only in this way people can make full use of it to make our country develop quicker.
成稿:
As we can see from the pictures, some children are so addicted to the Internet that they would rather die than stop surfing the Internet. Others spend all their time on the Internet and they forget all about food and rest. However, they refuse to take any other people’s advice, including their parents’.
With the rapid development and popularity of the Internet, many people, especially the youth, are addicted to it, which affects their studies and work, and sometimes even destroys their family life. Worse still, it is not good for their health, mentally and physically.
In my opinion, people should make full use of the Internet, searching for useful information. On the other hand, we should use it in a proper way. Don’t waste too much time on it. At the same time, teachers and parents should take measures to educate and protect the youth against the harm caused by it.
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Powerful sentences:
实例指导3—Science and Technology
人类对外部空间的着迷已有上千年的历史了。一直以来人们对空间探索有两种相反的看法。有的人认为探索外部空间是浪费时间和金钱,资金投入巨大,而收获甚微；而另一些人却认为人类可以得益于空间研究。请你以"Do We Need Space Exploration？"为题, 就我们是否需要太空探索为主题发表自己的看法。词数:不少于130。
1. 首先要对所给出的提示材料进行分析,材料已经指出对探索空间有两种相反的看法,因此我们在审题的时候,脑子里就有一个文章的大体框架:首先就是摆出这两种相反的观点,分别对这两种相反的观点给以描述,适当运用例证来分别论述。最后,也是这篇习作点睛的地方,就是给出自己的观点,并加以论证。
2. 在组织文章结构时,不妨可以将其分为三部分:第一部分引入事实。第二部分分别论述正面反面观点。第三部分论述自己的观点。
3. 文章在行文上要保持连贯,通常在正反观点交替时使用一些连词,如:on the other hand, on the contrary,使正反两种观点形成鲜明对比。在摆出自己观点的时候也要适当过渡,承上启下提出自己的观点。
初稿:
we will benefit from space exploration in the future. Therefore, I’m definitely in favor of exploring outer space, and of course, our scientific knowledge is becoming greater and greater.
1. 这篇文章段落结构还算比较完整。文章第一段从事实引入要讨论的话题；第二段提出两种对立的观点并加以具体论述；第三段提出自己的观点并展望前景。语言比较通顺、并运用了复杂的句式。在文章衔接的地方也使用了meanwhile, however,as far as I’m concerned这样的承接词语。
2. 文章不足之处在于:
①没有真正参透主题,题目是"Do We Need Space Exploration？",所以应着重强化正面观点(自己的观点),以便突出主题——到底需不需要太空探索。而作者把文章当成了对比观点的文章了,在第二段中详细论述了这两种相反的观点,导致主题不突出。
②结构虽然完整,但应把个人支持的观点独成一段,这样更能突出地针对问题加以论述。
成稿:
Man has been fascinated by outer space for thousands of years. It has been almost forty years since man’s first landing on the moon. ???? Now, some people believe that space exploration is a sheer waste of time and money. They point out the fact that it cost billions of dollars to carry on space re-search, but little information was brought back. However, every coin has two sides. There are still a number of other people who believe that space exploration has more advantages. ???? In my opinion I believe that it will bring more benefits to the people. Many new products, such as weather and communication satellites, are also products of space programs, and they have benefited people all over the world. And what’s more, scientific knowledge about outer space has been acquired by mankind.
实例指导4—On the Interne
【写作任务】
在人们的日常生活中，互联网起着越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示，为某英文杂志社写一篇On the Internet的征文稿。
信息 看国内外资讯、获取各种有用信息、下载学术资料等
通讯 可以发电子邮件、打电话等
学习
创造学习机会，如上网上大学、阅读各种书籍、自学外语等。
娱乐 欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏。
生活
购物、聊天、交友等。
结论
注意：
1．征文稿必须包括表内所有信息，且行文连贯、通顺；
2．词数：120词左右；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
On the Internet
The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our life…
【写作指导】
题目要求以On the Internet为题写一篇征文稿，实际上是一篇说明文，主要介绍因特网的用途。此文可以安排一个段落，一气呵成；也可以安排两个段落，先介绍用途，最后用一两个句子进行简单地总结。由于说明文以客观介绍为主，因而以使用一般现在时为主。此文所涉及的词汇和短语有：
1．1earn news both at home and abroad
2．have／gain access tO useful information
3．download some academic data
[组词成句]使用上述词汇和短语将各项要点表达出来，可以使用多种手段来避免句式单一，如定语从句、介诃短语等。还要注意某些汉语要点用英语可以有多种表达法，此时可以尽量使用较高级的表达方式，如“获取信息”可以使用have access to information 或get information来表达，显然前者更高级，语言表达效果更佳。
1. We can learn news both at home and abroad and have access to all kinds of useful information as well.
2. We can even download some academic data.
3. The Internet is also a popular means of communication, through which we can send emails and make phone calls.
4.
The
Internet
creates
learning opportunities, such as going to net universities, reading various kinds of books and learning foreign languages by ourselves.
5. We can enjoy music , watch sports matches and play chess or cards.
6. We can. even shop on the net, chat with others and make friends with them.
7. The Internet has made our lives more colourful.
8. How fantastic it is!
[组句成篇]此文要表达的并列信息较多，因而组句成文时要特别注意前后信息内容的衔接，可使用恰当的衔接词语，如meanwhile，besides，also，through，moreover，such as，last but not the least，in a word等，这样可以使信息之间的层次更清晰、更分明。
【学生习作】
On the Internet
The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our life. On the net, we can learn news both at home and abroad and have access to all kinds of Useful information as well.
Meanwhile, we can download some academic data. Besides, the Internet is also a popular means of communication, through which we can
send
emails
and
make
phone
calls.
Moreover, the Internet creates learning opportunities, such as going to net universities, reading various kinds of books and learning foreign languages by ourselves. We can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or cards. Last but not the least, we can even shop on the net, chat with other people and make friends with them.
In a word, the Internet has made our a lot more colourful. How fantastic it is!
实例指导5— 如何看待青少年上网现象
本周班会的主题是“你如何看待青少年上网现象？”假设你本人赞同青少年上网，请根据下表所列的上网益处及友情提示写一篇发言稿。词数：150左右。
益处 友情提示
1. 获取资讯，搜索信息；?
2. 收发邮件；?
3. 上网校听课，下载学习资料；
4. 听音乐、网上购物，节省时间，丰富课余生活；
5. 为工作中所需的电脑技能打下基础。 1. 不要迷恋网络游戏；
2. 远离不良网站；
3. 对陌生人要保持警惕。
成稿:
As we all know, the Internet plays an important role in our lives and in my opinion, we teenagers can benefit a lot from it. We can read news from every part of the world and get useful information online. We can send e-mails to our family as well as to our friends no matter where they are. We can also study at home with a computer by attending an online school and downloading study materials. We can also listen to music and shop online, which can save us a lot of time and make our life more colorful. Finally, we can prepare for our future work well by improving our ability to operate computers. ????But we shouldn’t play Internet games too much, we should keep away from harmful websites and be careful when talking with strangers online. That’s all. Thank you!
Powerful sentences:
1. Students can get a lot of new information online.
2. As we all know, the Internet plays an important role in our daily lives.
3. Finally, we can prepare for future work well by improving our ability to operate computers.
4. We should keep away from harmful websites and be careful when talking with strangers online.
实例指导5—看电视利？弊？
要求写一篇关于看电视有利有弊的文章，要求字数在80-100之间。
要写出自己的见解。
Is Watching TV a Good Thing?
①Television has changed??people’s life much since it was invented. Now it has become one important part of modern life.
People②enjoy themselves after hard work by watching TV. They can see some plays, some stories, some ③sports matches without going out of home, and without spending much money in buying tickets. TV programmes make people’s life??more interesting. People can ④learn much from TV, students can study by watching some educational programmes. People can see news, weather reports, programmes about science and computers. People all over the world can learn from each other and get knowledge when they are watching TV.
But not all the programmes are good enough. Today, there are too much programmes about love and crime. Some students become bad because they learn from the bad people in those programmes. And watching TV
usually takes too much time.??It’s not good for people’s work and study. It’s not good for their eyes, either. People all over the world are watching TV. Is watching TV a good thing or a bad one?I think it depends on people themselves. If one can choose good programmes and he doesn’t spend??too much time on TV, it can be a good thing for him. 实战演练
?假设将来有一天能让你拥有一种超能来帮助那些需要帮助的人,你希望是什么样的能力？为什么？请据此写一篇文章,向某科技英语杂志社投稿,题目自拟。(词数:120左右)
My Wish Computers have developed very quickly and have greatly changed our lives. Maybe one day I will be able to enter other people’s dreams and communicate with them with the help of computers. Many people who have been badly injured in accidents cannot speak, hear or move. They accept their families’ care but they cannot
communicate with them. Both the patients and the families are suffering, especially the patients who are very lonely. I would enter the patients’ dreams, tell them that their families care about them and listen to the patients. Then I would go to tell their families the thoughts of the patients. It would be an honor for me to do these kinds of things.
Of course, I would not enter other people’s dreams without permission, since people need to have their own personal space.
网络在给我们带来方便的同时，也引发了很多问题。简要描述该漫画内容，并就此现象发表议论。词数：120－150
http://www.people.com.cn/GB/paper69/17239/1511131.html
Just as the picture shows, Internet is like a real net, which lures lots of people into it who can not break away though attempting to. On one hand, internet makes many things possible, such as chatting whenever and wherever you like, looking up information at a high speed. On the other hand, a large number of people desert their families as a result of addiction for Internet. Some get cheated, some even commit crimes through Internet.
As far as I’m concerned, everything has two sides---one is good while the other is bad, which is true of Internet. It is wise to make full use of its advantages and avoid its disadvantages. For our students, we should make the best of every minute to study rather than abandon ourselves to video games or chatting. At the same time, surfing in it for information is unnecessary to be prevented.
手机除了可以用来和别人通话和发短信外,它还具有很多其他的功能。假如你是某中学的学生,请根据下面提示,写一篇120词左右的英语短文,向你的外国朋友描述一下你理想中的手机。
功能:
听音乐、看电视、看电影、阅读、拍照、上网等
Cellphones
There are many kinds of cellphones on the market. Which one do you like best? Allow me to tell you what I think makes a good cellphone. I think cellphones, as high-tech machines, should be able to be used in many ways apart from simply calling and sending text messages. It should be easy for me to watch TV and surf the Internet with them. In this way, I could also read the latest news at home and abroad. What’s more, I want to read e-books on my cellphone at any time and in any place. I also want to be able to store music and films on my cellphone so that I can relax in my spare time. I also think it would be wonderful if cellphones could be used as cameras too. Then I could record all of the important moments in my life.
最近某英文报纸举办了题为"What Do You Think of Science and Technology?"的征文活动,请你结合自己的感受,写一篇120词左右的英语短文,发表自己的看法。
As we know, science and technology plays an important role in the development of our society. The development of science and technology goes hand in hand with the development of our society. For example, the appearance of mobile phones at the end of last century made it possible for people to contact each other anytime and anywhere. So we can say science and technology makes our life better and more colorful. However, science and technology can also do great harm to mankind if it is misused. We will never forget that during World War II, modern weapons killed millions of people. In my opinion, we should use science and technology in the right way.
网络技术的进步已经成为现代科技发展的重要标志之一,网络也成为了人们工作、学习、生活和娱乐的主要手段。请以此为话题,写一篇120 -150词的英语短文,添加到自己的Web log中,举例说明网络对人们和社会的积极影响,谈谈自己的观点,以便更好地与大家交流。