My name is Li Hua and as a senior three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow student.
Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation for those stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help or advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it is high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made my mind to make every effort to study, so hard work is important. It’s the key to a success. Finally, I sincerely hope what all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man.
第一行 after----before
第二行
student----students
第三行 stand 前面加 who
第四行 will----would I----me
第五行 firm----firmly
第六行 made后面加 up so----because/for/since/as success前a去掉
第七行 what----that