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53. The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
(A) a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
(B) a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
(C) a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
(D) critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
(E) critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
答案解析如下：
(A)a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a
【正确】 “as well as”两边比一定连接平行对象，但“a critique……”和“a vision……”用“as well as”平行在一起，没有任何错误，正确地作同位语修饰了“‘Essay on Heat and Light’”。
【大意】 十九世纪化学家Humphry Davy在《Essay on Heat and Light》中叙述了他早期实验的结果，这篇文章是对Robert Boyle之后所有化学的批评以及对Davy希望发现的新化学的憧憬。
(B)a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a
【错误】 平行结构：本选项将“a critique”和“his envisioning of”平行在一起，但如(A)所示，“envision”存在相应的专有名词“vision”，因此并不需要使用“envisioning of”这种表达方式。
(C)a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well
【错误】 平行结构： “a critique of”是一个专有化名词概念，而“envisioning”(由于其后没接“of”)仅仅是一个动名词，两者逻辑概念不对等，不应平行。
(D)critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of
【错误1】 修饰成分：“，critiquing”放在主谓结构“Humphry Davy presented……”的尾部作伴随状语，表意逊于(A)中的用“a critique”作修饰"Essay on Heat and Light"的同位语。
【错误2】 平行结构：类似地“critiquing”和“a vision of”无法平行。
【错误3】 简洁明了：“and”和“also”之间存在语义重复。
(E)critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of
【错误1】 修饰成分：见(D)中【错误1】。
【错误2】 平行结构：见(B)。
【最优解题思路推荐】
只有(A)选项“and”两端的结构平行且语义合理，因此选择(A)。