四六级作文话题:学生兼职工作
第一部分:
总体原则:六个字:先结构后表达,总体做法:三步法
1. 审题:两项内容:1)英文标题+2)汉语提纲
2. 将三个汉语提纲转化为一个英文表达,充当该段主题句。
3. 将主题句扩展成一个英文段落。
第二部分:实例及具体时间分配
第1、2步为准备工作 时间控制在三分钟以内:
如一道六级的写作考题为:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students Part-time Jobs. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职, 有人反对
2. 我的看法
审题:1. 题目:College Students Part-time Jobs
2. 提纲:1. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职, 有人反对
2. 我的看法 学习网
题目关键词为: part-time jobs
3. 提纲转化为三条:
1. 有些人持相反意见
2. 有些人赞成大学生做兼职
3. 我的看法
先结构:
联想课堂所讲:三段或四段式结构,且每段只写一项内容。
以三段式为例:
后表达:关键词罗列
1. 联想开篇句式:when it comes to , people opinions differ/vary. 或者it is a common phenomenon for to do sth, 或者 it can be noticed that an increasing number of
将这些表达以关键词的形式列出:如: when 或者 it is
2. 转化主题句:
1) 有些人持反对意见- Others hold the opposite view。
理由:1. main task- academic study, 2. society complex- cheated
2) 有些人赞成大学生做兼职- hold the positive view
理由:1. ease financial burden 2. enrich experience
3) 我的看法- both right 。
3. 扩展成文
例文如下:
It can be noticed that an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs in their free time. However, people opinions on this issue vary greatly. Some hold the opposite view. Firstly, they claim that it is academic pursuit that is college students primary task. Secondly, owing to the complexity of the society, students may be easily cheated
Others, on the contrary, are of students part-time jobs. They argue that by doing part-time jobs, students can earn a little money to ease their parents financial burden. Besides, they believe that part-time jobs enable them to enrich their personal experience and broaden their horizons. Thus, they can acquire the knowledge which can not be obtained in campus。
Who is right? I think both sides have something right. Actually, part-time jobs can be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and minimize their unhealthy influences, so that they can benefit us in a better way. 。
最后,请检查基本语音错误:1, 单词拼写 2, 时态, 3, 单复数,4,关联词
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