SAT写作法则及实例：多运用动词和主动语态

　　多运用动词和主动语态

　　作为文章的编写者，你主要的任务是把你想说的用文字的方式传达给你的读者。为了达到这个目的，你可以多使用动词和主动语态来为你的文章增加生命力。

　　1、在文章中把一个主要的名词换成动词例;Verb to be: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am is a violation of local noise abatement laws.

　　Action verb: the use of leaf blowers before 8 am violates local noise abatement laws.

　　2、用一个动词来替代句子中的其中一个重要的名词或形容词例;Verb to be: The quarterbacks wretched performance was a disgrace to his team

　　Action verb: The quarterbacks wretched performance humiliated his team

　　3、如果你不知道该如何更改动词，可以重新整理语句形式例;Verb to be: Jamie was happy to be part of the all-star soccer team.

　　Action verb: Being a part of the all-star soccer team thrilled Jamie.

　　以上的例子已经解析了，运用动词可以是句子更具生动性，也更能吸引读者的眼球。

　　4、主动语态 Passive Voice: 例;the main idea for my essay was stated as the first sentence in the first paragraph.

　　Active Voice: I stated the main idea of my essay in the first sentence in the first paragraph.

　　Passive voice: money for the new recreation building was raised quickly Active voice: the recreation committee quickly raised money for the new building.