在学生平时的SAT写作练习中,留学的老师们通过长期的观察与总结,发现了6类常见的问题,这是导致学生在考试中丢分的原因。在SAT写作中,应避免使用口语化的词或表达,如俚语、省略表达;也应该避免使用概念较大或者学术性的词或表达。今天我们就来看SAT写作6类常见问题之六:用词与文章风格不符。
1、Original:It is in intelligence that makes people successful and earn large sum of bucks and gain great reputation!
Revised:So,I believe it is intelligence that leads to success in terms of financial wealth and reputation.
buck有美元的意思,但这是一种非常不正式的说法。在写作中所使用的语言要注意整体的风格,如果在正式的写作中出现及其口语化或俚语化的词语,会让阅卷者感到很突兀。
2、Original:The international banks are cognizant of the new laws significance.
Revised:The international banks are aware of the new lawsignificance.
cognizant是十分正式的词,此处用aware即可,在托福写作中,要避免使用属于性质的词。
所以说我们在进行SAT写作练习以前要先明确文章的风格,在用词上表达恰当,避免上面所提到的错误的出现。
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