SAT写作练习中的重复现象

　　有些同学在SAT写作练习中为了凑文章的单词数总是喜欢把简单的句式复杂化，把一个本应该简洁的表达方式写得很罗嗦，甚至把一个意思用几个相近的单词反复说明，我们一定要在SAT写作练习中避免这些重复。

　　1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size. Large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

　　更简洁的表达方式为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

　　2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如： My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm.

　　这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁： My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm.

　　以上提到的问题在很多同学的SAT写作练习中都有发生，复杂的句式让人读起来都觉得很绕口，SAT写作中我们可以通过多举例来说明问题，而不应该发生这种重复现象。