开头:简洁,吸引人 (do: 小故事,平淡地说不平淡的事vice versa, 引用,反问,悬念,开门见山想不出好开头时用,权宜之计先写中间再写开头;not do: 太离奇,夸张,深奥)
多用过渡词
别用难词
多用描述,少用概括
多用主动,少用被动/系动
少用to have, to come, to go, to make, to move, to get
用语力求生动, 避免枯燥
只有当行动者是抽象或难以描述的事物时才用被动句
试着用一下压韵(不推荐中国学生使用)
活用比喻,不要用CLICH
废话少说
从句少用(注意,that, which, who, thing, all)
少用词多意少的短语,
尽量少用a, an the, up, down, its, and
变化句式,勿千篇一律一律
别用发音重复的
少用超长句,要长短搭配
结好尾
泛指用THEY/YOU
Kind of + 单, kinds of + 复
用单词,别用数字(one but not 1 )
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