在你的写作的时候,尽量的使用简单的词汇并写作易懂的语句。这样做,可以使读者更清楚的明白你的立场和你文章的目的。要记住,SAT写作不是考察你的生词量,而是在考察你是否能将你的想法通过文字的方式传递给读者。
如果想做到这点,那么作者在写作的时候,应该避免使用那些无关紧要的词汇,模糊不清的词汇,和条例不清的语句。让我们来看下面的例子;
例;To facilitate input by the maximum number of potential purchasers, questionnaires were designed and posted well in advance of the launch of the promotional marketing campaign.
Improved: Before we began advertising, we designed and mailed a marketing survey to find out what customers were looking for.
通过比较,我们可以清楚的明白,上面的句子,使用了一些不必要的词汇,而导致句子看上去繁琐难懂。下面的句子,经过编改,变得简单易懂。
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Burn a hole in your pocket 有钱不花难受
Are you addicted to your phone? 你是不是玩手机上瘾了?
A cashless society 无现金社会
To fall at the first hurdle 跌倒在第一关
It takes two to tango 一个巴掌拍不响
Clean up your act 改邪归正
Cyclists make Olympic history, 400-year-old shark 英国自行车运动员创英奥运历史,400岁格陵兰鲨鱼
To turn something upside down 把……翻个底朝天
Pull something out of the hat 突施妙计
Get someone's goat 火冒三丈
Hangry 饥饿成怒
Glass-bottomed bridge, cancer risk for HRT and 120-year-old man 世界最长玻璃桥开放,荷尔蒙替代疗法增患癌风险,印度教120岁僧人
To make a monkey out of me 捉弄我
A recipe for disaster 后患无穷
To lie through your teeth 睁眼说瞎话
Old-school 老一套,老派
A bitter pill to swallow 不得不吞的苦药
Crash course 速成课
Too much stuff 物质主义和简约主义
Bye bye Big Ben's bongs 与大本钟的钟声暂时告别