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GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文四一

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  29. This speaker argues that farmers who invested in organic farming equipment

  should resume synthetic farming because it is financially unwise to continue organic

  farming. The speaker cites studies showing that farmers who switched to organic

  farming last year had tower crop yields. Based on these studies, the speaker concludes

  that the relatively inexpensive investment in organic farming equipment cannot justify

  continuing to farm organically. The speaker also claims that continuing to farm

  organically is financially unwise because it is motivated by environmental, not

  economic, concerns. The argument suffers from three problems.

  One problem with this reasoning involves the vague comparative claim that

  farmers who switched to organic farming fast year had lower crop yields. We are not

  informed whether the survey compared last years organic crop yields with yields from

  previous years or with those from synthetic farms. Moreover, the author provides no

  evidence about how the survey was conducted. Lacking more information about the

  survey, we cannot accept the speakers conclusion.

  Secondly, the speaker assumes that the low crop yields for first-time organic

  farmers last year are representative of crop yields for organic farmers overall. However,

  more experienced organic farmers might have had much better crop yields last year.

  Also, the first-time organic farmers might improve their own crop yields in future years.

  Moreover, last years yield may have been unusually low due to poor weather or other

  factors, and thus not indicative of future yields.

  Finally, in asserting that organic farming is financially unwise because it is

  motivated by environmental instead of economic concerns, the speaker unfairly assumes

  that a practice cannot be both environmentally and economically beneficial. It is

  possible that, in the long run, practices that help protect the environment will also result

  in greater economic benefits. For instance, organic farming methods may better protect

  soil from depletion of the elements that contribute to healthy crops, providing an

  economic benefit in the long run.

  In conclusion, the speakers argument is poorly supported and is short-sighted. To

  better evaluate the argument, we would need more information about the how the

  survey was conducted, especially about the comparison the survey makes. To strengthen

  the argument, the speaker must present evidence that last years crop yields from first-

  time organic farmers are representative of yields among organic farms in general. The

  author must also provide evidence that environmentally sound practices cannot be

  economically beneficial as well.

  

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