编辑点评: ETS是美国教育考试服务中心的简称,本文是ETS公布的Issue主题的范文,大家需要多多研读4-6分的作文,分析它们获得高分的原因,学习到有用的逻辑思维、框架内容和词句等。
美国教育考试服务中心公布的Issue主题的范文中,包含了不同的分数,大家需要仔细研读的是 4-6 分作文,对于一些低分作文,大家可以看看官方对它们的评价,分析其分数低的原因。
Test3
Our declining environment may bring the people of the world together as no politician, philosopher, or war ever could.
Environmental problems are global in scope and respect no nation s boundaries.
Therefore, people are faced with the choice of unity and cooperation on the one hand or disunity and a common tragedy on the other.
6、
Cooperation---or Tragedy?
The solution to the world s growing environmental problems may have to wait awhile. It has been said that environmental problems are global and respect no nation s boundaries.
Unfortunately, pollution and its consequences still fall to large measure on those least likely to do anything about it: poor countries willing to sacrifice anything in order to sit at the table with the world s wealthy.
As far as the industrialized nations of the world are concerned, the world is a big place. Environmental destruction taking place outside their borders may sometimes be fodder for government pronouncements of concern, but few concrete actions.
Deforestation of the Amazon, for instance, is of vital concern to all those who wish to continue breathing. But the only effective deterrent to this activity,the restriction of international aid money to those countries showing net deforestation, has been stalled in the United Nations by those unwilling to interfere in the internal politics of other nations.
Because of the differential impact of polluting activities around the world, and even in different regions of a single country, many governments will undoubtedly continue to promulgate only modest environmental regulations.
Costs to polluting companies will continue to carry as much weight as the benefit of a pollution-free environment. Particularly in the current political climate of the United States, the well-documented expense of today s pollution-control measures will be stacked against the unknown long-term effects of polluting actitivities.
Why should I spend millions of dollars a year, which causes me to have to raise the cost of my goods or eliminate jobs, if no one really knows if air pollution is all that harmful?
Show me the proof, an air polluting company may demand.
Realistically,it won t be until critical mass is achieved that the hoped for choice of unity and cooperation will be a viable one.
Only when the earth as a whole is so polluted that life itself becomes increasingly difficult for a majority of the world s people will there likely be the political will to force global environmental laws on governments worldwide.
But the optimists among us continue to believe that the world can be shown the error of its ways.
They continue to point out that the sky is probably falling--or at least developing a big hole.
高分的作文大家要像它们学习,低分的作文大家要勤于分析原因。
上一篇: 新GRE写作须知:必备经典句型3
下一篇: GRE作文分析方法
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第7讲:三大类从句(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第21讲:词义猜测题(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第14讲:妙用常识及排除法(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第28讲:漫画作文(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第23讲:短文和表格信息的理解(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第22讲:推理判断题(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第25讲:阅读简答1(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第15讲:解题步骤(湖南专用)人教新课标版
国际英语资讯:UN Security Council pays tribute to late Russian UN Ambassador Churkin
高三英语备考总复习课件人教版选修6:写作进行时-说明文 19张
高三英语备考总复习课件人教版必修5:写作进行时-提纲作文 29张
高三英语备考总复习课件人教版:专项语法15-特殊句式 99张
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第8讲:助动词和特殊句式(湖南专用)人教新课标版
国内英语资讯: Political advisors proposals receive timely feedback
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第19讲:细节理解题(湖南专用)人教新课标版
高三英语备考总复习人教版必修1:Unit 5《Nelson Mandela—a modern hero》课件83张
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第16讲:判断词性、词义和词形1(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习考点讲义:阅读理解-地理
2017届高考英语二轮复习考点讲义:阅读理解-词意猜测解题指导
高三英语备考总复习课件人教版:专项语法16-情景交际 123张
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第26讲:阅读简答2(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习考点讲义:阅读理解-个人情况与人际关系
福建省福州文博中学2017届高三英语人教版:第一轮复习基础知识测试10
国际英语资讯:World Bank says policy uncertainty weighs on trade growth
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第10讲:词汇辨析(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第29讲:表格作文(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第18讲:长难句理解(湖南专用)人教新课标版
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第27讲:(半)开放作文(湖南专用)人教新课标版
中国与法国将实现“驾驶证互认换领”
2017届高考英语二轮复习课件 第9讲:助动词和特殊句式(湖南专用)人教新课标版