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1.The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature s Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products.
Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build our next new store in Plainsville, which has many such residents. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club, which nearly closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. We can even anticipate a new generation of customers: Plainsville s schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness for life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
A、跑鞋和运动服装卖得好并不一定说明P地区的居民关注健康生活,可能因为这样的商店比较少,因此即使是绝对数字不大的居民购买也会形成 卖得好 的情况。同样,健康俱乐部体重练习和厌氧练习班满员也不能说明,因为同样可能因为这样的俱乐部很少。
B、即使跑鞋、运动服装卖得好,健康俱乐部满员,是因为P地区的居民关注健康生活,也不一定适合在P地区开设Nature s Way的商店。因为正如作者所说的,他是根据以往在其他地区的经验得出的,而其他地方成功的做法在P地区并不一定同样取得成功。因为P地区的居民的喜好可能有所不同。
C、另外,学生被要求参加 fitness for life 项目,并不一定他们就开始关注健康生活了;即使他们开始关注,也不一定会喜欢Nature s Way的健康食品以及相关产品。每个人都有自己独特的喜好。
2.The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.
Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community s yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting.
A、B地区提出了这样的要求,但是B地区的居民是否真正严格执行了这个要求,作者并没有提及。如果该地区居民并没有严格按照该规则执行,则作者之后的推测就完全站不住脚了。
B、即使B地区的居民严格执行了该规则,也不一定是促成B地区平均价值增长3倍原因。因为造成平均价值增长的原因还有很多,比如通货膨胀,购买需求增长等。
C、即使B地区平均价值增长3倍是由于该规则,那也是7年前到现在的情况,并不能够保证今后还能继续增长下去。人们对房屋的评判标准是会随着时间改变的,可能今后人们更加关注于房屋的结构、房屋的地理位置以及周围环境等。
D、即使还能够继续增长下去,那也是B地区,D地区即使采用了相同的措施也不一定能够获得同样的成功,因为两个地区毕竟有很多的不同,例如D地区的居民可能不太喜欢这样的要求,该地区的居民可能更加关注于房屋的物理结构以及价格等。
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