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gre argument70提纲分析汇总

发布时间：2016-03-01 编辑：查字典英语网小编

　　前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。

　　题目题材：交通安全

　　gre argument 70题目：

　　Studies show that in 70 percent of traffic accidents, at least one driver involved is less than 10 miles from home when the accident occurs. This statistic indicates that drivers have a tendency to drive incautiously when they are close to home, probably because familiar surroundings give them a false sense of security. Thus, the places where people feel safest are the places where they are in fact at greatest risk of serious injury.

　　提纲：

　　The author fails to provide any data concerning average distances of drivers from their homes in driving.

　　The author fails to illustrate that the driver near home is mainly responsible for those accidents.

　　No direct evidence is provided to prove that it is the incautious driving that resulted in those accidents.

　　The author fails to prove that drivers involved in those accidents do feel familiar with surroundings at the spot where accidents were taken place.

　　Granted that people do drive incautiously close to home, we cannot guarantee that it is the false sense of security that resulted in the accidents.

　　The author does not provide any information about the severity of accidents.

　　We cannot hastily generalize from the facts cited above that most situations where people feel safe are risky.

　　注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。

　　无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。

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