前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
题目题材:环境
gre argument 112题目:
The following proposal was raised at a meeting of the Franklin City Council.
Franklin Airport, which is on a bay, is notorious for flight delays. The airport management wants to build new runways to increase capacity but can only do so by filling in 900 acres of the bay. The Bay Coalition organization objects that filling in the bay will disrupt tidal patterns and harm wildlife. But the airport says that if it is permitted to build its new runways, it will fund the restoration of 1,000 acres of wetlands in areas of the bay that have previously been damaged by industrialization. This plan should be adopted, for it is necessary to reduce the flight delays, and the wetlands restoration part of the plan ensures that the bays environment will actually be helped rather than hurt.
提纲:
The author fails to prove that the construction of new runways could reduce the flight delays.
The author simply assumes that funding for the proposed restoration of wetlands will be actually effective and can necessarily restore the wetlands to their original situation.
The airports promise about funding for restoration of wetland does not demonstrate that we could continue harming our environment.
The argument fails to evaluate the positive and negative effects of the proposed actions thoroughly.
The author ignores other solutions to reduce the flight delays.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。