高中英语书面表达 抓大放小,不漏要点
注意：（1）日记须包括所有图画的内容，可适当增减细节，使日记连贯。
（2）词数100左右。
命题意图：本题考查学生的读图能力和运用逻辑讲述故事、传达主旨的能力。
错解分析：（1）人称、时态运用不准确；（2）主要内容遗漏。
解题技巧与方法：（1）细读文字说明部分，弄清人称、时间、事件背景；（2）仔细观察每一幅图，确定文章中心，确定内容要点：a.听见喊救命，下水救女孩 b.好心人相助
c.送女孩去医院 d.上课迟到 e.感谢信 f.受表扬；（3）依据要点写出提纲，然后拓展成文；（4）检查要点、格式、人称、时态、动词变化形式、标点符号等。
参考答案：
October 23rd Friday Fine
On my way to school at noon I heard loud shouts from the lake.I found a girl struggling in the water.I quickly jumped into the lake,swam towards the drowning girl and carried her to the bank.A kind woman also came to help.We immediately sent the girl to the nearest hospital.When I hurried to school,I was late for class.However,I didn’t explain to my teacher what had happened.But to my surprise,a letter of thanks to me was put up on the bulletin board in our school in the afternoon.So my teacher and classmates knew the whole thing and they praised me a lot.I felt a little shy but proud.
●锦囊妙计
1.文字、图画或图表同等重视，不可厚此薄彼，粗心大意。
2.确定中心，围绕中心确定内容要点，凡是对说明文章中心来讲必不可少的内容切不可遗漏，而与中心无关的的细枝末节都可以省略;
3.可将内容要点写在草稿纸上，然后依据要点写出提纲，成文后再根据草稿纸上的要点逐一查对。